Comment from LovnPeace

Excellent

t ? Don't understand this last part. This is a painful plea for help. My only answer that works for me is God, but there is human help available. Please seek it. xo Blessings. Barbara

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks. The t was a mistake. I?m better now. Thanks

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly like the rhythm of your poem.
I could relate to feeling as you describe, in the past, but I stopped comparing myself to others. That's not being fair to yourself.


Best wishes!
Alexandra


One edit:

*soar is the word

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks. I?m ok now. It took decades to work things out.

Norm