Silence
Silence is golden7 total reviews
Comment from NadineM
Oh, how lovely!! I loved the ambiance and tranquility of your 5-7-5 poem! A moment however, may be too short, if it's what your heart and soul is seeking!! I am loving the chosen font! I think that the comma is so perfectly placed, as it causes the reader to actually take a moment to pause, and breathe in the silence you write of! Well done, Pupa!!
Silence can certainly feel blissful, unless of course it is actually deafening!! We all know of such "silences"!!
Thanks for sharing this with me and best wishes in the contest!! ~ Nadine
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Oh, how lovely!! I loved the ambiance and tranquility of your 5-7-5 poem! A moment however, may be too short, if it's what your heart and soul is seeking!! I am loving the chosen font! I think that the comma is so perfectly placed, as it causes the reader to actually take a moment to pause, and breathe in the silence you write of! Well done, Pupa!!
Silence can certainly feel blissful, unless of course it is actually deafening!! We all know of such "silences"!!
Thanks for sharing this with me and best wishes in the contest!! ~ Nadine
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Pupa, your 5-7-5 poem had good sensory appeal. Silence can be so beautiful. It gives people a chance to get closer to nature and their own inner-self. Well done; well said. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
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Hi Pupa, your 5-7-5 poem had good sensory appeal. Silence can be so beautiful. It gives people a chance to get closer to nature and their own inner-self. Well done; well said. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from LovnPeace
I really like this. Good to see you again, pretty lady. Good luck in the contest. This is a great entry. Blessing from a fan. Luck not really needed here.
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I really like this. Good to see you again, pretty lady. Good luck in the contest. This is a great entry. Blessing from a fan. Luck not really needed here.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from RainbewLatte
I love how this poem just sums up the perfect vibe or emotion. We can all use a blissful moment of silence in our lives. The noise can be insane in such a hectic world.
Presented with simple black text with intentional font against a white-gray background, I'm almost drawn to be curious as to what the picture you had intended to add was.
Boo wifi.
In fact, my wifi had died just the night prior, and speaking of reliance and all these distractions, I could hardly do anything. So I sat down with a book. Books are such necessary things.
Thank you for writing and allowing yourself to share this piece. It's well done, especially in such a confined space of words (though I don't fully understand poetry myself).
Have a beautiful day, and thanks!
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I love how this poem just sums up the perfect vibe or emotion. We can all use a blissful moment of silence in our lives. The noise can be insane in such a hectic world.
Presented with simple black text with intentional font against a white-gray background, I'm almost drawn to be curious as to what the picture you had intended to add was.
Boo wifi.
In fact, my wifi had died just the night prior, and speaking of reliance and all these distractions, I could hardly do anything. So I sat down with a book. Books are such necessary things.
Thank you for writing and allowing yourself to share this piece. It's well done, especially in such a confined space of words (though I don't fully understand poetry myself).
Have a beautiful day, and thanks!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly like that you used satisfaction and distraction. Bold move as action rhymes seem difficult. You used them perfectly. I could relate to this because I was a single mother for many years and Special Education Teacher, Sunday School Teacher, and Daisy through Brownie First Scout Leader. I couldn't find a moment of quiet on some days. If I did it was blissful. You chose the best word. Best wishes!
Best wishes!
Alexandra
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I enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly like that you used satisfaction and distraction. Bold move as action rhymes seem difficult. You used them perfectly. I could relate to this because I was a single mother for many years and Special Education Teacher, Sunday School Teacher, and Daisy through Brownie First Scout Leader. I couldn't find a moment of quiet on some days. If I did it was blissful. You chose the best word. Best wishes!
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from w.j.debi
We all enjoy those peaceful moments. They give us a restful moment to catch our breath and just let our mind clear.
Excellent syllable count. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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We all enjoy those peaceful moments. They give us a restful moment to catch our breath and just let our mind clear.
Excellent syllable count. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thanks for your review and good wishes
Comment from JSD
An excellent idea which is made more successful by your use of a rhyme. And we all know exactly what you mean. You say a great deal in these few syllables. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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An excellent idea which is made more successful by your use of a rhyme. And we all know exactly what you mean. You say a great deal in these few syllables. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thanks for your review and good wishes
