Babylon
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Comment from estory
I think you have a great structure here to underscore the theme, and I liked how you started out with that tight 'one world, one nation' and then opened it out as the puzzle pieces spill across the floor creating this jumbled up mess we have today. estory
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I think you have a great structure here to underscore the theme, and I liked how you started out with that tight 'one world, one nation' and then opened it out as the puzzle pieces spill across the floor creating this jumbled up mess we have today. estory
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, God did create one world and we are ALL God's children. It's amazing how we've changed all of that. Not at all a good thing. Thank you for the well written reminder.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Yes, God did create one world and we are ALL God's children. It's amazing how we've changed all of that. Not at all a good thing. Thank you for the well written reminder.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Yup, and there a re languages inside languages, and I am thinking about those tribes in Africa that sometimes speak over 40 languages inside the same country,
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that Tower of Babel thing was really a great disservice for the world. But you speak about five languages, right? So you'll have no problem! May God help us live in this Babylon!
and dumped a puzzel (puzzle)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Yes, that Tower of Babel thing was really a great disservice for the world. But you speak about five languages, right? So you'll have no problem! May God help us live in this Babylon!
and dumped a puzzel (puzzle)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Sort of Speaking :) I am mostly blending in:) Thank you for the correction, I was at work, and I was rushing to post something:) anything:)
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Good writing. Good message as usual.
Your meaning is crystal clear. But my sweet sweet friend, it is puzzle! I spelled my own Character's name once! I always look forward to your work. You keep writing, I'll keep writing and the universe will right itself!
How's that for a plan?
Karen
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Good writing. Good message as usual.
Your meaning is crystal clear. But my sweet sweet friend, it is puzzle! I spelled my own Character's name once! I always look forward to your work. You keep writing, I'll keep writing and the universe will right itself!
How's that for a plan?
Karen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Karen, and sorry for the mistake, I was rushing to post and do my job at the same time:) I should give you a fair warning, English is my third language, I never studied in school, I just picked up from TV, so if there are mistakes, please let me know.
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There are plenty of words in the English Language that do not spell how they sound. And you do fine sweetie. Karen
