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Now That You're Gone

A 2-5-2 Poem

8 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These are a few words of sadness here as loneliness is something many suffer with these days. A few words with great meaning here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
    Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-5-2, Now That You're Gone, has the proper formatting and gives a visceral presence to the emotion that will likely be taking up residence in the wake of separation.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 2/5/2 prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Is melancholic but beautiful.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly like the photo matching your words so well That is a good answer to the challenge but if I were you I'd look another way. :) Loneliness is horrible and I've felt it in the past . But I'd your lonely prepare for when your not. Keep positive. Things change for the better if you expect them to change for the better. Best wishes! Alexandra
I could relate to
Best wishes!
Alexandra

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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    Thank you very much
Comment from RodG
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Empty nester? I can easily relate. Loneliness fills the house. But in time you adapt and find new interests. You capture the MOOD very well in your poem/artwork combo. Rod

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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    Thank you very much
Comment from JSD
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Gorgeous illustration, lovely colour scheme, all adding to the sad, lilting tone of your little syllabic box. Well done and the best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Succinct. On the nose. To the point. You have this nailed. This is very well done.The title sets it all up. Quite cleverly done. I hope you keep writing. You have great style. The picture also sets up the longing. Brilliant.

Karen

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
    Thank you so very much
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 23-Aug-2023
    Have a great week. Karen
Comment from karenina
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Way to evoke emotion in such a brief form! Your chosen image was perfect to set the mood and your three word author's note said it all...

Grief knows no schedule!

Karenina

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much
reply by karenina on 22-Aug-2023
    You are welcome!