Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I really loved the format you used. You were right on. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. :) Be blessed and hugs.

Gypsy

reply by aryr on 23-Aug-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

This is very evocative Gypsy. You paint a beautiful picture in the reader's eye. I actually conjured up an image while reading this. No picture was necessary.
Luv & stuff,
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Haiku poem - Excellent picture presentation - Good syllable count and connection between lines - picture connects with poem - Beautiful Gypsy holding the world (her home) in her hands - full of valleys and hills - Good job - AP

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I like the imagery in this. The use of the word verdant made me see it as crisp and cool. Very cool poem. Thank you for sharing your piece of the universe. Gretchen

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Gypsy, I do think that this poem could be about you. Your poem has good sensory appeal. I can see you under of dome of starlit stars.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery: Of special note:

over verdant valleys and rolling hills
(I can see it. Also, good alliteration.)

Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you, Margaret

I do like gypsies and their culture. :)

May you have a lovely day.

Gypsy

reply by LateBloomer on 21-Aug-2023

Me too. I always loved Cher's song,
Gypsies, Tramps, and Thieves.
Lol, but true. Xo. M

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Nice combo of artwork and verse to describe your poem.

I would change 'over' to 'cover' - same syllable count but IMHO a more active word.

Mark

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Over creates a visual image of a roof and cover feels more like a blanket.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

reply by Mark D. R. on 21-Aug-2023

no problem with your interpretation

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh nice dome home haiku with views of valleys and hills...
good imagery and connection for the reader.
smooth flow of words...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I'm positive you're comfortable anywhere. Your sweet spirit is comforting for us all. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem set with this gorgeous package. Your talent is shining.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Barbara,
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I love gypsies (*=*)

Gypsy
"There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate." - Linda Grayson

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Gypsy is at home all over the world wherever the dome of the sky is visible and wherever the green of the earth below is traversable. Lovely picture and description in your poem!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

I love gypsies clothes, jewelry, and music. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem ((*=*))

love
marival