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bullfrog mating call

2-5-2 contest (ribbit)

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, I gave you your 2nd vote.

Since I was a child (and a tomboy) I have always loved frogs.

In my first boarding school, I was age 6 and 1/2 there was a creek passing through the premises and I would go catch tadpoles in the creek in our free time even if it was not allowed.

I'd build a secluded angle and put them in there and watch them grow over the weeks.

I love their bright hues and when the males call for a mate.

The French like to eat frogs' legs I prefer to see and hear them in their habitat.


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
    I only ate frog legs once - once was enough for sure! I am all for hearing rather than tasting.

    Thanks for your vote. More is certainly needed to climb on to the awards podium.
reply by tempeste on 23-Aug-2023
    I don't really understand how the first poem has actually 10 votes.

    It is a pleasant read but in all honesty,
    I don't feel it is worthy of the red ribbon.

    Go figure.

    Have you been for your Summer holidays, yet?

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
    We take the last Sunday in June for a week with my entire family, including grandkids.
reply by tempeste on 23-Aug-2023
    Okay, so you have already been ..

    That must be quite a big bunch.

    Two is already a crowd for me. (sigh)

    Keep safe !
reply by tempeste on 24-Aug-2023
    You reached the podium !

    Congratulations on your yellow ribbon win!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Thank you for defining "nutha" from the Urban dictionary. To me it brought realism to your 2-5-2 poem.

Best of luck in the contest. This poem should do well.

Cheers to the ribbit in us,
John

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
    Thanks John for that reply to my contest post.

    I don?t recall that your Stout beer had those old Super Bowl TV ads saying ribbit (-;
Comment from jim vecchio
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People often say I'm a "nutha". Only they pronounce it wrong and leave off those last two letters. Anyhow, this entry should jump out at the judge. It is warts several accolades!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
    Ha! I don?t think you are a nut (maybe a piSTASHio -;). Thanks for your review for my short poem contest entry.
reply by jim vecchio on 21-Aug-2023
    Thank you! the only stash I know of belonged to Huntz Hall in a story I just posted.
reply by jim vecchio on 22-Aug-2023
    I messed up! Sorry. I was going over the story I alluded to and it said "author information not available for this contest. So if you see anything that looks like that tale, please do not vote for it! /