Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Congrats on #2 position. I thought yours was the best of course. No accounting for taste! haha Sometimes folks don't like funny. Well, I do. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Karen

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thanks for your super review and encouraging words.
I will definitely keep writing humour :)

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 28-Aug-2023

I am proud of "Moving Day" only 100 words tell me what you think Karen

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That ending had me curled up laughing! The whole story was funny, and you get it going so well. I think the ending was absolutely perfect. I see you're winning, so it's not just me. Well done and good luck! xx

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023

Thanks for the great review and comments. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your metre started off well but you lost your way by the last stanza and the word (tipsy) does not rhyme with (twist) and (exist). May be this would fit: (Remember to show her your fist).

Having said all that I was entertained Peter, loved this Limerick stack and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023

Thanks for the review. It's a play on the last word, which is really "pissed". In the authors comment I said I couldn't think of a word to rhythm, which is a bit of a clue...

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 26-Aug-2023

I was going to suggest that word as it matched, but wouldn?t dare! Ha ha ha, I understand now Peter, a great Limerick stack, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023

Thanks very much - glad you enjoyed it

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Third stanza, last line, 'And'. Last line of last limerick, what about 'something amiss'? 'I think that there's something amiss'? Oh no, I get it. You mean pissed! Lol. That's funny. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thanks for the great review - glad you enjoyed it !
Thanks for the "And".
I do indeed mean "pissed".
If you ever saw the 1970's UK TV series "Up Pompeii" with Frankie Howard, you'll know what I was doing. There are some youtube clips - search odes up pompeii

Comment from ruminative scribbler

Excellent

Humorous, nonsensical limerick - just as they should be!
And the crazy pic compliments the first verse perfectly. I wish you all. the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thanks for your great review.