The Four Seasons
Summer, Fall, Winter, Spring3 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
What a cute poem. No wonder you were a winner in the contest. This would make a fun picture book. I work in the church nursery and the kids would love the rhymes.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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What a cute poem. No wonder you were a winner in the contest. This would make a fun picture book. I work in the church nursery and the kids would love the rhymes.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much! I am a Sunday School teacher! That?s interesting. I appreciate your review. 😊
Comment from JSD
A simple and pleasant educational verse for children. The language is appropriate and the subject matter plain and easy. Just not sure about the eighth line. 'smile instead of frown'? Might be better if the scansion fits?
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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A simple and pleasant educational verse for children. The language is appropriate and the subject matter plain and easy. Just not sure about the eighth line. 'smile instead of frown'? Might be better if the scansion fits?
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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I know what you mean. Thank you for your feedback!
Comment from Barry Penfold
Clever with good rhyming. Fits the brief very well. Spring for me for sure. Keep up the writing and all the best for the contest.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Clever with good rhyming. Fits the brief very well. Spring for me for sure. Keep up the writing and all the best for the contest.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your kind review Barry! I like spring and summer.
Sincerely,
Kristen Ulrich