Demonic Angels
A Tale of ...11 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I have so many stories/poems to catch up with I am sorry I missed this gem. A perfect photo to your story of how sweet little angels can turn to demons on a dime and then reclaim their halos.
As usual, creative and humor-filled.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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I have so many stories/poems to catch up with I am sorry I missed this gem. A perfect photo to your story of how sweet little angels can turn to demons on a dime and then reclaim their halos.
As usual, creative and humor-filled.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2023
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Have you been ill? Traveling? Writing?
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a review.
Tom
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I have 62 messages in my review box. Some poets submit 3 or 4 a day. I feel like I am shoveling against the tide. I also do not want to ignore new FS submissions. I am surprised I miss yours because as soon as I see it, I read. I am also taking walks with Harvey each day.
Plus household stuff
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Can they post 3-4 a day. I know it seems that way but by mistake I tried a third way back when and the application said: no-no-no. Should that be in quotes if the message was by A.I.?
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great story, Tom!!! As always, you demonstrate a refined and well- balanced sense of humour. I really enjoyed it. I very rarely find you entering contests, and you did great in this one!!!
Congratulations!!!!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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Great story, Tom!!! As always, you demonstrate a refined and well- balanced sense of humour. I really enjoyed it. I very rarely find you entering contests, and you did great in this one!!!
Congratulations!!!!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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Your right
I rarely do
Competitional reviews are slanted towards members with more followers
That?s okay
I like what I write
Comment from Bill Schott
This was a great story that brought the demonic powers to play in the misbehaving children. The solution of the invocation of the Holy Spirit works to bring calm.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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This was a great story that brought the demonic powers to play in the misbehaving children. The solution of the invocation of the Holy Spirit works to bring calm.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Not so, Bill. Here is the captured line for this contest: Write a flash fiction story, any genre, which has 500 words or less."
That's OK. Heck, I didn't remember this was a contest until your remark.
Comment from jim vecchio
I was really angry until someone sang to me and tickled my chin with a pussywillow. Anyhow, thanks for this piece which is very believable and the lovely photo. My prediction is: this is a winner!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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I was really angry until someone sang to me and tickled my chin with a pussywillow. Anyhow, thanks for this piece which is very believable and the lovely photo. My prediction is: this is a winner!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Always yours for the read and compliment. Tom H
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Loved your work!
Comment from Lisasview
The photo is perfect and so is your story. I was immediately pulled in to read all of it. Oh so so clever... I really enjoyed the read...
I wish you the very best of luck in the 500 word fast fiction.
Lisa
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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The photo is perfect and so is your story. I was immediately pulled in to read all of it. Oh so so clever... I really enjoyed the read...
I wish you the very best of luck in the 500 word fast fiction.
Lisa
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the visit and kind appraisal.
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You are so welcome,
lisa
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent and deserving of a six but sadly I have none! I love your style of writing and how so much vivid description and reference are contained in this very concise prose form. The scenes just jump out of the screen. A very talented write. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Excellent and deserving of a six but sadly I have none! I love your style of writing and how so much vivid description and reference are contained in this very concise prose form. The scenes just jump out of the screen. A very talented write. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Well, okay. That makes two that like what I do. The other, beside you, would be me, for I see what many overlook for my being a kook and writing what I please to please me, and now you. Have fabulouso day, dear fan.
Oh, Thanks.
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Well, okay. That makes two that like what I do. The other, beside you, would be me, for I see what many overlook for my being a kook and writing what I please to please me, and now you. Have fabulouso day, dear fan.
Oh, Thanks.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
That's a scary story, I don't know I never liked that movie:)but you manage to transform into something [ositivee:" spare no words in conveying where moments ago, two virtuous angels stood, were a pair of "Rosemary Babies" glowering at an uninvited guest. All innocence was swallowed as if the gates of hell gaped open.
Then, when all seemed lost, the organist played "Peace Be Still." Immediately, the anger calmed like the stormy sea beneath the Savior's feet. All fear dissipated, as the apostles did, as the once-possessed infants seemingly sprouted wings to fly into mama's loving arms bringing harmony where dissension reigned." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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That's a scary story, I don't know I never liked that movie:)but you manage to transform into something [ositivee:" spare no words in conveying where moments ago, two virtuous angels stood, were a pair of "Rosemary Babies" glowering at an uninvited guest. All innocence was swallowed as if the gates of hell gaped open.
Then, when all seemed lost, the organist played "Peace Be Still." Immediately, the anger calmed like the stormy sea beneath the Savior's feet. All fear dissipated, as the apostles did, as the once-possessed infants seemingly sprouted wings to fly into mama's loving arms bringing harmony where dissension reigned." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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I appreciate the review and well wishes.
Comment from royowen
I have seen that look, I can remember Indah, my granddaughter colluding with grandson, Miah, her cousin, escaping, both aged four, and opening the gate to the swimming pool, which the they were forbidden to do, one.hoisted the other up, to open the latch, heh heh, little angels indeed, beautifully written, excellent job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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I have seen that look, I can remember Indah, my granddaughter colluding with grandson, Miah, her cousin, escaping, both aged four, and opening the gate to the swimming pool, which the they were forbidden to do, one.hoisted the other up, to open the latch, heh heh, little angels indeed, beautifully written, excellent job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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I appreciate and honor your continuing remarks
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Most welcome
Comment from Douglas Goff
Yes, you pretty much described every child that I have ever had the misfortune to come into contact with. Ha!!!
I loved all the various references in this entertaining piece. Very nicely done and enjoyable. Good luck in your literary engagement Flash Fiction contest.
D
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Yes, you pretty much described every child that I have ever had the misfortune to come into contact with. Ha!!!
I loved all the various references in this entertaining piece. Very nicely done and enjoyable. Good luck in your literary engagement Flash Fiction contest.
D
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Oh, D.G. Your opening retort makes Me laugh
I am glad I entertain you sometimes. 😛
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If you are who I suspect you are then your pieces are always interesting?if not amusing
D
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I have horns of a longhorn and smoke coming from my nose and amusing comes naturally behind the screen
Comment from Isabel Fontes
I enjoyed this story a lot. Very creative and quite fun.
Music always calms the most libertine souls, bringing them peace and harmony.
I liked the description, pace and fluidity that the story produces.
An enjoyable read.
Good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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I enjoyed this story a lot. Very creative and quite fun.
Music always calms the most libertine souls, bringing them peace and harmony.
I liked the description, pace and fluidity that the story produces.
An enjoyable read.
Good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Your welcome to red and comment anytime. It was a very kind review. 🥰
Glad you enjoyed it.
