2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Relentless Autumn Storm"-
16 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Just reviewed another wonderful one of yours and this one popped up...
Great colors and superb image... I love t all...
Then the words are oh so very perfect....
Lisasview, in Hot and humid Spain
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Just reviewed another wonderful one of yours and this one popped up...
Great colors and superb image... I love t all...
Then the words are oh so very perfect....
Lisasview, in Hot and humid Spain
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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It's hot and humid here too because we have a tropical storm in California.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate." - Linda Grayson
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Right now it seems the US has dangerous weather throughout the country. Your poem is very appropriate right now. I enjoyed the entire package.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Right now it seems the US has dangerous weather throughout the country. Your poem is very appropriate right now. I enjoyed the entire package.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Yes, I live in southern California, tonight we had flood and earthquakes warnings...scary.
Thank you! It's a treat to read your excellent review and encouraging words. Thank you for reading my poem.
Gypsy
"To the world you may be just one person, but to one person you may be the world."--Dr Seuss
Comment from thoughtgame2
I have fallen in love with the way you present your pieces. can you share with me the format you used. breathtakingly quiet. nevertheless, I will be following your work from now on. thank you and have a greater life than the last.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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I have fallen in love with the way you present your pieces. can you share with me the format you used. breathtakingly quiet. nevertheless, I will be following your work from now on. thank you and have a greater life than the last.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
this was a cool tanka
love how you put the homeless signs tangled with the leaved
nice touch
smooth flow and good images
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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this was a cool tanka
love how you put the homeless signs tangled with the leaved
nice touch
smooth flow and good images
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
Nicely done and I enjoy the fact that you printed it out below so that I could read it. Have a good day and may God bless you with all of your writing.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Nicely done and I enjoy the fact that you printed it out below so that I could read it. Have a good day and may God bless you with all of your writing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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I write it in black for you. :)
Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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I appreciate so much you being able to write in the black for me when you the color combination does not work well for my side. Patricia.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a bummer reminder of what awaits just around the corner. Fall used to be my favorite season but getting older made me realize how utterly stupid I used to be!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a bummer reminder of what awaits just around the corner. Fall used to be my favorite season but getting older made me realize how utterly stupid I used to be!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I really like this tanka. The way you tangle the mundane with the magnificence of autumn is very well done. The last line is beautiful. Good job with a tanka.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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I really like this tanka. The way you tangle the mundane with the magnificence of autumn is very well done. The last line is beautiful. Good job with a tanka.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
This was a great gogyohka, thank you Gypsy. The picture was a wonderful duplicate. The wet cardboard that were tangled with the gold and crimson leaves. They were a nice touch. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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This was a great gogyohka, thank you Gypsy. The picture was a wonderful duplicate. The wet cardboard that were tangled with the gold and crimson leaves. They were a nice touch. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from JSD
Another beautiful poem. Thank you. The juxtaposition of the homeless sign and litter with the beauty of the leaves is perfect. And, as always, the colours complement the words perfectly.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Another beautiful poem. Thank you. The juxtaposition of the homeless sign and litter with the beauty of the leaves is perfect. And, as always, the colours complement the words perfectly.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
You have a great way with words and you have captured the imagery so very well, indeed. You tend to make these look the part in these short form poems, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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You have a great way with words and you have captured the imagery so very well, indeed. You tend to make these look the part in these short form poems, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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Most welcome