Love Can Be Magic
Kindness and love can work miracles.5 total reviews
Comment from CD Richards
My other half went to see this show a couple of weeks ago. She said it was the second-best show she's seen (behind Matilda).
I enjoyed your telling of the story. Congrats on the result. Craig
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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My other half went to see this show a couple of weeks ago. She said it was the second-best show she's seen (behind Matilda).
I enjoyed your telling of the story. Congrats on the result. Craig
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the read and the feedback. Appreciated. Are you her beast?
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Haha! She probably wishes.
Comment from jim vecchio
I truly enjoyed this and the background color effect and picture exalted your words. Always self-conscious, I often felt like tht Beast on dates but God led me to the one that unconditionally accepted me. I hope you, too, know that True love!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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I truly enjoyed this and the background color effect and picture exalted your words. Always self-conscious, I often felt like tht Beast on dates but God led me to the one that unconditionally accepted me. I hope you, too, know that True love!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thanks for sharing. Have had that luck too. Thanks for read and feedback.
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And thanks for your writing!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent poem! Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite stories. I've seen the Broadway musical several times in NYC. The transformation of the beast is symbolic of Loves Power. I enjoyed your presentation. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Excellent poem! Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite stories. I've seen the Broadway musical several times in NYC. The transformation of the beast is symbolic of Loves Power. I enjoyed your presentation. Best wishes!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Never had the good fortunate to see the play, but, of course, have watched all versions of film. Still like Disney animation the best. Thank you for the read and feedback.
Comment from Eleri
This is a good rewriting of the Beauty and the Beast story that generally reads well. However, I think you mean 'mien' rather than 'mean' in the first line and I believe that temper lean means that his temper is not fierce - did you mean that? Also, seep to me implies something oozing out or leaking out - was that your intent at the end? Having made these points, I do like this poem so good luck with it in the contest
Eleri.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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This is a good rewriting of the Beauty and the Beast story that generally reads well. However, I think you mean 'mien' rather than 'mean' in the first line and I believe that temper lean means that his temper is not fierce - did you mean that? Also, seep to me implies something oozing out or leaking out - was that your intent at the end? Having made these points, I do like this poem so good luck with it in the contest
Eleri.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the suggestions I will reconsider both mean and lean. Also I did want to use seep to illustrate a slow transition.
Comment from JSD
Excellent rhyme and rhythm, not only telling us the story but reminding us of the message that lies within. Well done and I hope you do well in the competition. (Just note that I think you want 'mien', not 'mean' in the first line.)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Excellent rhyme and rhythm, not only telling us the story but reminding us of the message that lies within. Well done and I hope you do well in the competition. (Just note that I think you want 'mien', not 'mean' in the first line.)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Yes, you are correct; I did want mien and not mean. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
