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Poems of the things of the spirit

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We may look back and have some regrets Michelle but we need to forgive our selves and others for the past. A fine poem with good end rhymes, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
    Agreed. My thoughts about regrets in the poem were not about people but more about other life choices like where we choose to live, career paths, etc.
    I was attempting a sonnet. I find the rhythm difficult.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, No Regrets, seems to calm the head of the window watcher who sees all the possibilities that are, were, or may be available if one could travel in all directions.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
    They see all possibilities and choose one. The problem is regret of those not taken. That was the problem the poem was highlighting.