Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Exceptional

Oh yes! This is a brilliant senryu. I love all the tie-ins with your color. I knew I heard the phrase Tangerine Dream somewhere so thanks for the notes.
Such nice touches of alliteration throughout. Really digging it!
Take care and enjoy your weekend fellow Dead Head.
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

You too, Katie Mae Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

You too, Katie Mae Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I love the imagery in this poem, so very romantic.

Of special note:
dusted with golden dust

(Oh, yes, dust me already. Lol.)

Good alliteration. Perfect photo choice. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile.

Have a tangerine dream tonight. Xo. Margaret

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your kind words and wonderful review.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Tangerine is an interesting color to be tangled with. Of course, you have the alliteration and then the artwork. Which put it all together into a perfect package. I had fun reading this poem.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023

Thank you, Barbara (*=*)

gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Exceptional

wow the haiku is perfectly centered between the two pics! how'd you do that??

great flow - with words, colours, and picture!

nicely done! thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023

Thank you, Shelley (*=*) I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. You center test as normal. Use 500 for the bottom. No space on top and 2 bottom. You may have to play with the font.

gypsy

Comment from aryr

Excellent

I loved the picture of the full length couple, Gypsy. I appreciated the senryu...it totally made sense, it was great. I liked how you did it. Blessed be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023

Thank you, Aryr (*=*)

reply by aryr on 17-Aug-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Senryu poem - nice picture presentation connecting with picture -good syllable count and flow- tangled in tangerine dream - poetic -Good Job AP... you know what is really amazing? You coming up with different titles to 3000 poems!!!lol hug

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023

AP

Hehe. The titles are easy.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

The use of color as a description of the romance. With tangerines, I think of sweet and juicy. Gives the hint to the newfound passion. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023

Gretchen

I didn't think of that. :) good interpretation.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Sweet poem. The alliteration is excellent. Tangled and tangerine. Almost rhyming too. Then there is dust and dusk. Chiming sounds that match the assonance of sunset too. An excellent little poem.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you, John :) may you have a great evening

gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That sounds romantic - "dusted with golden dusk." Great use of alliteration. ("tangled in tangerine" and "dusted...dusk") And it seems that the evening will be full of happy embraces!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

i fell in love with the picture and the poem came after, i guess it's ekphrastic

thank you very much, big sister :)

love .xoxo
marival

reply by lyenochka on 16-Aug-2023

Nice!