Comment from Isabel Fontes

Excellent

The brevity of your poem is matched only by the depth of its meaning. I admire the skilful way in which you manipulate language. The beauty of winter's colours and refreshing cold truly struck me as I read the poem.
I found the depth of emotion conveyed in these words to be truly inspiring. It was a wonderful experience to read.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Isabel as always you present a fine review and your word choices when explaining yourself, leave no doubt to what you're saying. That's what I appreciate most about you. Your insight is a special too! Thank you for your fine review and for your time I appreciate you. I hope your evening is great!
Thank you for your fine review and for your time. I always appreciate you and it's going to be safe so I hope that you have a great evening.

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

HAHAHAHA!! This is great. Winter is the beast, flowers are the lion tamer. You are one seriously clever, ORIGINAL writer! I love how your mind works and forms unusual scenarios with the words you pair up.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Thank you!! Lol I'm glad you like it! Thanks so much for you're review! Always glad to see you come up thanks again!

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I know what you are talking about, my Canadian friend. Nowadays I have been secretly enjoying cool weather days which are not too often. But realizing the winter is coming soon, I can't help to sigh.

Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you so much! Yes we are going through a heat wave 33C which is approximately 96F
Southern West Coast BC is the warmest spot in Canada. Our Okanagan is considered arid to desert land. Such diversity here... Thank you again for your review! Your time I always appreciate it!

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

Fantastic presentation. Complementary colors are extremely eye-catching and attractive. Imagery and implied metaphor of a lion-like warrior is super in such a short form. Good luck in that contest!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it! Thank you again for reading and commenting as well as your kind words!
Hope you're enjoying your day!

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Hi Lea,
So much better!
Love it..

Love your choice of the image.... Bright and colourful.
And your words are wonderful.
There is a huge space between the first and second line that needs to be fixed.
I wish you the best of luck in the 6 Word Poetry Contest.
Lisa

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you Lisa for your review and the catch! I will correct. Thx! Enjoy your day!

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Loads going on in these six words. The use of the flower name, I presume, the pistolin, mixes nicely with the image of the sword. The whole military theme works really well. Love it. (There's a bit too much of a gap between first and second line, or is that intentional?)

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you so much ill fix it right away. Thank you for your review and kind comments! I hope your day is awesome! Thx again!