Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

In this dust free verse challenge, you show us that the choice is ours, to be -
Dead dust...dirty dust....dreary dust.
Or to look to the sunlight and moonlight and be dust free. This has a lovely spiritual feel to it, Michelle.
Nicely done,
cheers
valda

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thank you so much. I am glad you got the spiritual message.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A poignant and well-considered verse about a longing not to be reduced to dust but, instead, enjoy a more glorious unity in "the light of the heavens." I found this really quite moving, Michelle, in its very clear and sincere message of faith. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you. I?m glad you found the message clear.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I love to honor The Lord, but if you want to remain dust free, avoid my room! From childhood to high school, college, marriage, and now assisted living, I have never been known to be dust free. The only thing dust free around here is my immortal soul, purchased through the Blood of Christ.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Exactly!! Hahaha

reply by jim vecchio on 16-Aug-2023

God Bless!