2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
That's true a thief can't take the moon way with him/her. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed reading, as I always do your beautiful work.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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That's true a thief can't take the moon way with him/her. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed reading, as I always do your beautiful work.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Barbara
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your zen Haiku- nice picture presentation- flows very well - theme - the thief - leaving behind the most valuable- none tangible, unable to rob one of their intangible ability to love ( unless they choose to wallow in self pity and anger before ultimately releasing what binds - to love again- moon - represent Ming to me - most precious- love
Zen - good job AP
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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I like your zen Haiku- nice picture presentation- flows very well - theme - the thief - leaving behind the most valuable- none tangible, unable to rob one of their intangible ability to love ( unless they choose to wallow in self pity and anger before ultimately releasing what binds - to love again- moon - represent Ming to me - most precious- love
Zen - good job AP
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a good case study of an optimist. The fact that it is implied there was a robbery and the optimistic view that there is still a beautiful view. Joy can't be stolen. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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This was a good case study of an optimist. The fact that it is implied there was a robbery and the optimistic view that there is still a beautiful view. Joy can't be stolen. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day. You understand the poem well.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
nice zen haiku
robbed yet not of everything lol
how about...
the thief left behind
a most precious possession --
window full of moon
just a thought ;)
the flow was a little trippy
but then that could be just me lol
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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nice zen haiku
robbed yet not of everything lol
how about...
the thief left behind
a most precious possession --
window full of moon
just a thought ;)
the flow was a little trippy
but then that could be just me lol
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day. I like it the way it is.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jim vecchio
When you decide to write notes at the bottom, you really get serious. I don't know if I should comment on them or the poem itself! Anyhow, your message resonated in a wonderful SATORI! (see, I read it!) Next time I look out my meager window at the moon, I'll think of you and this work!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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When you decide to write notes at the bottom, you really get serious. I don't know if I should comment on them or the poem itself! Anyhow, your message resonated in a wonderful SATORI! (see, I read it!) Next time I look out my meager window at the moon, I'll think of you and this work!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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Many hugs and blessings to you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, what a perfect image I just felt like looking into the moon sacred soul. Thank you for the notes, your haiku are little ornaments attached on the infinity line.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Wow, what a perfect image I just felt like looking into the moon sacred soul. Thank you for the notes, your haiku are little ornaments attached on the infinity line.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from w.j.debi
Well, when put that way, material possessions seem trite. The thief may take things, but Nature gives us such beauty that can never be taken from us.
This poem evokes a wonderful feeling of contentment.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Well, when put that way, material possessions seem trite. The thief may take things, but Nature gives us such beauty that can never be taken from us.
This poem evokes a wonderful feeling of contentment.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs