Pools of Love
The death of Jesus4 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
Very nice Penofire. It isn't easy to lay words upon the parchment that offers anything different from what ages have continued to offer when it comes to He who carried the cross. The line you offered, 'great pools of love' ... was awesome.
Very nice Penofire. It isn't easy to lay words upon the parchment that offers anything different from what ages have continued to offer when it comes to He who carried the cross. The line you offered, 'great pools of love' ... was awesome.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
Comment from Teri7
Amen! This is a very beautiful and very true Spiritual poem you have penned about our Lord, Jesus and how He gives us eternal hope if we receive Him. I am so thankful I have Him inside me! Best wishes in the writing prompt contest. love and blessings, Teri
Amen! This is a very beautiful and very true Spiritual poem you have penned about our Lord, Jesus and how He gives us eternal hope if we receive Him. I am so thankful I have Him inside me! Best wishes in the writing prompt contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
Comment from jim vecchio
You told the story of Christ's death so poetically! Thank God, the story does not end there! Now we have the Hope we need! Even though we murdered His Son, God still calls out to us.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
You told the story of Christ's death so poetically! Thank God, the story does not end there! Now we have the Hope we need! Even though we murdered His Son, God still calls out to us.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Jim, for the six-star review. Our sin sent Him to His death, but this was God's perfect plan. Such great love is hard to understand.
May the Lord bless you greatly, Pen
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I am so thankful The Lord did not give up on us!
Comment from John Alvin1
What a great reminder of how God loved us, to sacrifice his son so that we would have eternal life. An amazing two events of death and resurrection. Thanks for writing about it.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
What a great reminder of how God loved us, to sacrifice his son so that we would have eternal life. An amazing two events of death and resurrection. Thanks for writing about it.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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I thank you, John, for taking the time to review my work.
May the Lord bless you greatly, Pen