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2023 Gypsy's Clubs

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6 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Beautiful imagery! The beauty of the moonbeams shines through even if through broken glass. It even makes broken glass perfect.
I enjoyed this. It fits your Wabi-Sabi perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
    You are very kind. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for the excellent 5 stars review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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excellent beauty seem through the broken window
good imagery and smooth flow
cool pics, too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)




 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
    You are very kind. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for the excellent 5 stars review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I don't think there is such a thing as an imperfect moonbeam. Nope, there's not. I enjoyed reading. I can see the hope of love riding on those moonbeams, even through a broken window. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
    Barbara

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful wabi-sabi poem (haiku), Gypsy. I adored your honesty with this one. Your words encompassed the broken window and the midnight stars. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Happy weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was very beautiful. I like how the image was something heavenly but enhanced by the broken glass. Very cool poem. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2023

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    Gretchen

    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Happy weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Great use of Wabi-Sabi meaning in your lovely haiku! In life we all become broken but even in our brokenness, the beauty that God created can still shine through us.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much for the lovely review, big sister. Happy weekend.

    love xoxo

    marival