2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Gray Sky".
13 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That great thing about the lotus flower is that it can grow from stagnant and "putrid" pond waters. Form the difficulties of life, like the storms that cut us, we can look forward to the beauty that will emerge after the storm.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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That great thing about the lotus flower is that it can grow from stagnant and "putrid" pond waters. Form the difficulties of life, like the storms that cut us, we can look forward to the beauty that will emerge after the storm.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much big sister. Have a wonderful day.
love xoxo
MariVal
Comment from JSD
Beautifully set out. The use of the grays complements your poem perfectly. And then the imagery, as usual, is perfect. Your choice of metaphor always works so well.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Beautifully set out. The use of the grays complements your poem perfectly. And then the imagery, as usual, is perfect. Your choice of metaphor always works so well.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This is a well illustrated poem that is is the color scheme of a storm which is a strong metaphor for the troubles of life. It ends with hope of rebirth.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Hi MariVal,
This is a well illustrated poem that is is the color scheme of a storm which is a strong metaphor for the troubles of life. It ends with hope of rebirth.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Joan
Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome, MariVal.
Have a great Sunday,
Joan
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a moving poem. I went from the cold gray and rain to the disgusting putrid clog to the anticipation of the beautiful lotus flower. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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This was such a moving poem. I went from the cold gray and rain to the disgusting putrid clog to the anticipation of the beautiful lotus flower. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Gretchen
Thank you very much, I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a great free verse, Gypsy. I liked the picture of the gray sky. Your words were enjoyable and they represented the truth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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This was a great free verse, Gypsy. I liked the picture of the gray sky. Your words were enjoyable and they represented the truth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your range of talent is amazing. I just finished reading the sunflower poem and felt happy. Now, this poem is the complete opposite. WOW!! Thank you for sharing with us. You're so talented.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Your range of talent is amazing. I just finished reading the sunflower poem and felt happy. Now, this poem is the complete opposite. WOW!! Thank you for sharing with us. You're so talented.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Barbara
I appreciate your kind words. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Stunning work Gypsy. I'm sure you meant to have it read as one long sentence. Beautiful imagery that takes the reader right in with you. I wish I had a sixer for you.
Tremendous work Gypsy!
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Stunning work Gypsy. I'm sure you meant to have it read as one long sentence. Beautiful imagery that takes the reader right in with you. I wish I had a sixer for you.
Tremendous work Gypsy!
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----how well I remember walking along the raging torrent of the flooded river by our house on a sullen winter's day with the sleet gray water matching you mood.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----how well I remember walking along the raging torrent of the flooded river by our house on a sullen winter's day with the sleet gray water matching you mood.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
This one had a harsher darker tone than the one I just reviewed. It showcases that your skills have a wide range.
I think your writings will outlive us all.
F
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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This one had a harsher darker tone than the one I just reviewed. It showcases that your skills have a wide range.
I think your writings will outlive us all.
F
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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F
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
actually grey skies and freezing wind would feel really nice right now LOL
great imagistic free verse - sad yet ending with a flower of hope
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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actually grey skies and freezing wind would feel really nice right now LOL
great imagistic free verse - sad yet ending with a flower of hope
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. May you have an awesome weekend.
Gypsy hugs