Songs of Recovery
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "A Labor of Love"A collection of poems around healing.
4 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very nice writing. The ending line was perfect. My favorite stanza:
We made together a haven for hurting hearts,
a sanctuary in an office complex,
with sunlit windows for the doctors,
and gorgeous pictures for us--
You are a Master Word Smith. Very nice.
D
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Very nice writing. The ending line was perfect. My favorite stanza:
We made together a haven for hurting hearts,
a sanctuary in an office complex,
with sunlit windows for the doctors,
and gorgeous pictures for us--
You are a Master Word Smith. Very nice.
D
Comment Written 15-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and the kind words. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
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You are very talented, young lady.
Comment from papa55mike
I've worked in several places where I sat on one side of the lunchroom, and everybody else was on the other side. I just read my book and smiled. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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I've worked in several places where I sat on one side of the lunchroom, and everybody else was on the other side. I just read my book and smiled. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and kind words. I?m glad I could make you smile. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is beautiful! I was trying to figure out who was the recipient. That person must be very special. You wrote from the heart with examples to back your feelings. Excellent! Best wishes to you and your poem's subject!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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This is beautiful! I was trying to figure out who was the recipient. That person must be very special. You wrote from the heart with examples to back your feelings. Excellent! Best wishes to you and your poem's subject!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! Everyone I worked with in the Psych Clinic was a rare treasure, so I thought I should let them know. Thank you for your time and kind words. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is the first time I have seen your work. I am heartened by how openly people write. I am basically a short story fiction writer.
And fiction mostly. A lot of the best writers like you just cut open a vein and let it flow. I can bash my husband over the head with an iron skillet for going into my secret drawer and eating my"PEEPS", but, i can not write about his addictions. Kudos to you. You are a very good writer.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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This is the first time I have seen your work. I am heartened by how openly people write. I am basically a short story fiction writer.
And fiction mostly. A lot of the best writers like you just cut open a vein and let it flow. I can bash my husband over the head with an iron skillet for going into my secret drawer and eating my"PEEPS", but, i can not write about his addictions. Kudos to you. You are a very good writer.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your time and the kind words. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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I am telling everyone who writes me that I won the Spiritual contest. No real money, but it's something.
Karen
