Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a wonderful modern haiku, Gypsy. I appreciated the picture of the dove. Your words were inspiring- especially the dripping off the feathers of the dove. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 10-Aug-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love the alliteration of D and f

a great dewy morning haiku
with smooth flow and cool pics

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this modern Haiku. The alliteration with the letter d, dew, drops, drip, down dove's, dusting, and dawn. They rolled off the tongue. This is a fun poem.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I like your Modern Haiku, especially with the alliteration of the letter "d." I liked especially the two pictures of a dove dripping with rain water, then the pure white dove flying freely, clean and fresh. Dove

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation- good syllable count and flow - dew drops on feathers-cool - "washing them off? Consistent with liquid ? See what you think- good job AP

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great use of alliteration in your modern haiku:
dew, drops, drip, down, dove's, dusting, dawn.
And the "feathers" followed by "dusting" makes me think of feather dusters and it's a great visual of the dissipating dewdrops as dawn turns into morning.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, big sister.

Love xoxo

Marival

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

A beautiful rendering of the soft moments of dawn. The dove, a symbol of purity. The dew drops washing away any soil from the feathers. This was a beautiful poem of new hope. Gretchen

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
the beautiful alliterations with your 'D' words and very enticing.

Now say that first line fast five times!

A magic moment captured in time and verse, the time when dawn bows down to loving power of the sun. How majestic in though!

Beautiful composition and presentation!

With our thoughts we create...
the shedding of burden.

Warm regards,
James.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023

Thank you very much, James. Sorry for the short response. I'm feeling down today.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis