Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I wonder who that was? Your husband to be maybe Michelle, I love the sentiments in your flash fiction and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

No. That true story part was the white smoke from the car. I didn't have a knight in shining armor show up. Hahaha

Comment from Paul Manton

Excellent

Hi, Michelle.
If true, (I see that it is!) a remarkable story. So, you married a) a policeman? b) a vehicle repair man? c) a helpful road user? d) someone much worse??
Well, I think that was a gasket, if you are lucky - so the best 'face' would be someone to tow you to a garage asap.
Really good build up in such a few words, and the illustration, making US the one for whom you fell!
Yikes! I really don't remember it. And I have an alibi - I was here in London all along!
Great piece, Michelle. Hope you're still together.

Paul

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Hahaha I love reading your reviews. Thank you. They make my day.

reply by Paul Manton on 10-Aug-2023

You're welcome, Michelle

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

That's awesome and from my experience, how love arrives. The full descriptions and pace of your writing sera reader up for the final line. I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023

Thank you for your encouragement.