Passion For Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Heavy"Book 3 of assorted poems
5 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The imagery in this ABC Poetry Contest Entry is really excellent. Your rendition is very clear and well-constructed. I wish you good luck in the contest. kay
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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The imagery in this ABC Poetry Contest Entry is really excellent. Your rendition is very clear and well-constructed. I wish you good luck in the contest. kay
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thanks for stopping in Katherine and having a read, I always appreciate your comments. I'm happy to see your name come up and your time is always valuable to me. I really enjoy your work too, by the way. Thank you again!
Comment from JSD
Not quite as good as yesterday's brilliance but still a very good piece of metaphor, economically written. Love the end and love the pursuit of the metaphor of luggage. Well done. x
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Not quite as good as yesterday's brilliance but still a very good piece of metaphor, economically written. Love the end and love the pursuit of the metaphor of luggage. Well done. x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you again for your kind review. I'm always appreciating your comments and your insight, and.
Your little pearls of wisdom along the way! More specialness to follow, I'm currently cooking up. Thank you again I hope you have a great day!
Comment from JT traveller
Heavy indeed. A poignant write with words that needed to be stated, which you clearly did very well. A question. Why the A starting the last stanza? Fantastic message. Well received. Jacqueline xx
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Heavy indeed. A poignant write with words that needed to be stated, which you clearly did very well. A question. Why the A starting the last stanza? Fantastic message. Well received. Jacqueline xx
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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The "A" symbolizes a beginning like the alphabet. So I thought after all that unloading crap dropped off then, we should begin again starting with the "A". Thank you for your kind review. I'm always happy to receive your comments and your time valuable as always, to me. Thanks again having awesome day!
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Best wishes Tea. Thank you for your kind words. Jacqueline xx
Comment from Isabel Fontes
An exciting poem but also heavy.
A powerful reflection on the highs and lows of life and the certainty of its conclusion.
I really enjoyed this intense read.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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An exciting poem but also heavy.
A powerful reflection on the highs and lows of life and the certainty of its conclusion.
I really enjoyed this intense read.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Yes, it is a bit heavy. I kept thinking about the phrase "lonely at the top".
I appreciate your comments and your kind review ad always you have great insight! Thank you!
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You are most welcome, Lea :-)
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Lea,
Looks like you are really writing a lot... And, I am getting notices on my Fan ....
I wonder if you are getting any notices of my posts?
Lisa
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Good morning Lea,
Looks like you are really writing a lot... And, I am getting notices on my Fan ....
I wonder if you are getting any notices of my posts?
Lisa
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Good morning Lisa, hope your day is grand! thank you for the review. No I haven't been getting any notices about your stuff which I think is kinda weird. I'm having trouble with one other account too I usually get her stuff. I dont see anything there either and when I try to look, I can't get anything. Think I'll contact support and see what's going on. I'll let you know if I'll find out anything thank you again talk to you soon!
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Sounds like a good idea.
Did you check my profile?
Lisa