Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Thank you! Sal XOs

Comment from Father Flaps

Exceptional

Hi Sally,
Well, the escape didn't go quite as smoothly as Fee thought it might. But he did get away. At least, he got into the sewage drain. But he's already sicker than he thought he'd be. And, he came across a rotting corpse!!! Holy Cow! Who's that, I wonder? A bit of a subtle hint at the end of the chapter...
{The only ones that were not present at the time were Detective Sally Law and King.
"Jackson, where's Sally?" I asked.
"She left about a half-hour ago to walk King." } ... I have a feeling Fee isn't going to get away. He's going to run into Sally & King, isn't he? I was hoping he'd disappear. (Sorry, but I always hope for the underdog.)
The sheriff and Army nurse both seemed a little lackadaisical. Tommy and Sally would not be pleased with either of them.
One thing I noticed though... isn't Lou Crenshaw supposed to be waiting for Fee in a blue Volvo? But he's been with the sheriff for over an hour. Would it take that long to crawl through the drain?
Let's see what Chapter 40 has to offer. I'm betting King will halt Fee's escape.
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023

My friend, you have blssed me so with generous stars and compliments. Thank you for giving of your time and talent. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Exceptional

Sally, I'm glad you dropped the demons out of your story.

Your chapter has an excellent balance of dialogue and description, both of which set a nice pace your story
I like. The way you lead up to the escape. Very nice legal slant.
Good luck with this chapter, Sally.
Hugs,friend,
Cindy

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023

Wow, what a wonderful surprise and added blessings to my week. I'm glad you enjoyed my latest chapter and thought it six star worthy. I'm so honored and blessed, my friend. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Good descriptions of the effect the mustard spread had on Fee and those around him. LOL The drama continues for Detective Sally and King. Another great chapter Sally.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Dear Valda, Thank you for the kind review and insightful comments. Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

The excape seems like it went well. Since it was mentioned earlier that he try to escape, I would have expected they would be watching closely. I"m looking forward to seeing how far fitsgerald. I hope the blind lady is okay.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Thank you for the kind review and comments. Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Sal xx You are so patient and organized to keep all of your characters true to themselves and your plot. Your dialogues are consistent too. Extraordinary writing my Friend! Alex :)) xox

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, my friend. Both are very much appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely. I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023

Dear Elizabeth, Thank you for the kind review and comments. Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Excellently organised escape. Excitingly told. Gripping and engaging to read. Love your authentic characters and thoroughly realistic dialogue. Thanks for sharing this. X

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter. It's so good to see you, John. Thanks for stopping by. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Well, it was just my luck as to be traveling and miss the first 12 chapters of your newest story. And since I didn't have time to go back and catch up, I've just been waiting for what comes next. But don't think for a minute that I haven't missed reading your story. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thank you for stopping by and for the lovely reviewmqnd compliments,Ric. Both mean so much! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh no! We don't want Elling anywhere near Sally! She got shot once by a criminal when she was out walking King alone!
Anyway, I guess it's good that the mustard worked too well as Elling is really fit for the sewer now. He seems pretty strong for someone who is used to a life of luxury. Crenshaw should have realized he can never trust a criminal!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, dear one. I know how busy you are and this is so appreciated. Stay tuned! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs