Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is very true. I know because I have MS and it has been cruel but I have not been alone and there is a lot of friendly support here. You are bot completely alone.

No and nor go hand in hand.

It had no(r) walls or

Please be well.

In the start of your poem I suggest you change my or to nor.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thanks for that. Correction made.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

This is a fantastic poem, you got my vote:) it speaks about hope, prayers and life tribulations. I like this stanzas:"here was a place on earth where I belonged.

It had no walls or address on a street.

When I was there a gift of golden song

was carried in my core, your voice so sweet.


There was a steady arm and hand to hold

when crossing chasms over the unknown.

Our promise to each other made us bold;

" In illness and in health," never alone." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for your encouragement.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This was a difficult prompt, and the usual words regarding love had to be omitted. You did a fine job and described the M and L words perfectly.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for your encouragement.