2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "I Forgot".
18 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I have to say, this poem felt different than the other heartbreaking poems. It sounded stronger, as if the writer has figured out something. The vulnerability isn't there. It's a stronger woman writing and reciting this. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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I have to say, this poem felt different than the other heartbreaking poems. It sounded stronger, as if the writer has figured out something. The vulnerability isn't there. It's a stronger woman writing and reciting this. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Stunning free verse poem, Gypsy. Using "I Forgot" throughout your poem, you conveyed the sadness, anger, and hurt of a person left feeling used, angry, and vulnerable.
Stunning in word and presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Stunning free verse poem, Gypsy. Using "I Forgot" throughout your poem, you conveyed the sadness, anger, and hurt of a person left feeling used, angry, and vulnerable.
Stunning in word and presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy-----and the pain of a break up can be, and often is, the worst emotional pain and feels exactly as you've so described; there's nothing to ease it but the passage of time
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy-----and the pain of a break up can be, and often is, the worst emotional pain and feels exactly as you've so described; there's nothing to ease it but the passage of time
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I expect you will never forget such an encounter as this in reality and I know how this can feel, a very emotional post, we never really recover from a love that was cruel, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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I expect you will never forget such an encounter as this in reality and I know how this can feel, a very emotional post, we never really recover from a love that was cruel, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Writebynight
The repetition says everything here. So many times we catch ourselves in moments of the past, only to be crushingly brought back to the present. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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The repetition says everything here. So many times we catch ourselves in moments of the past, only to be crushingly brought back to the present. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your free verse poem- good picture presentation- write flows well - like the breaks between - like pauses between thoughts - remembering- cool- suggest- 'not even in dreams- "you can commit-" change to ' can you' other option 'can't' - see what you think- - Good Job - AP
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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I like your free verse poem- good picture presentation- write flows well - like the breaks between - like pauses between thoughts - remembering- cool- suggest- 'not even in dreams- "you can commit-" change to ' can you' other option 'can't' - see what you think- - Good Job - AP
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from jessizero
This is one of my all-time favorites of yours. It resonated with me, and I'm sure many people can identify with it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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This is one of my all-time favorites of yours. It resonated with me, and I'm sure many people can identify with it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words sad, upsetting cruel. I liked how this author
used the words "I forgot" before each stanza as it intensifies the theme
of these words. The artwork is perfect and goes well with these words.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well - have a good night!....Maria
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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I found the author's words sad, upsetting cruel. I liked how this author
used the words "I forgot" before each stanza as it intensifies the theme
of these words. The artwork is perfect and goes well with these words.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well - have a good night!....Maria
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
"Courage starts with showing up and letting ourselves be seen."
Comment from aryr
This was a special free verse, Gypsy. 'I Forgot' is a unique title. You were able to use ' I Forgot ' in many ways that reported frustration and anger. The dual picture presented another way to fool us. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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This was a special free verse, Gypsy. 'I Forgot' is a unique title. You were able to use ' I Forgot ' in many ways that reported frustration and anger. The dual picture presented another way to fool us. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your kind review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem brought tears, that's a good thing because it shows you touched this reader. I think poems are supposed to do that. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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This poem brought tears, that's a good thing because it shows you touched this reader. I think poems are supposed to do that. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs