Some Cents
Or none. (nonsense poem contest)18 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem fits the contest well for it makes no sense. Of course, the pun and homonym for cents. Each stanza is filled with opposites.
Good luck in the c.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good evening.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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This poem fits the contest well for it makes no sense. Of course, the pun and homonym for cents. Each stanza is filled with opposites.
Good luck in the c.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good evening.
Joan
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica
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Don't mention it, Jessica.
Joan
Comment from LJbutterfly
You've done an excellent job creating a nonsense poem of opposites. Your first two lines let me know I was about to have fun reading. Your poem did not disappoint. You chose the perfect cartoon artwork to intensify the meaning of your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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You've done an excellent job creating a nonsense poem of opposites. Your first two lines let me know I was about to have fun reading. Your poem did not disappoint. You chose the perfect cartoon artwork to intensify the meaning of your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, that means a lot to me!
Comment from IAMBardMichael
Cute poem gave me a chuckle. I could sense the nonsense. Lol
I enjoyed the trimeter reading each quatrain
One suggestion, some of the rhythms were slightly off, there were a few hiccups so you should go back over the poem a few more times
Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Cute poem gave me a chuckle. I could sense the nonsense. Lol
I enjoyed the trimeter reading each quatrain
One suggestion, some of the rhythms were slightly off, there were a few hiccups so you should go back over the poem a few more times
Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your feedback! I will definitely re-visit
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun post Jessica with a play on the word cents and sense and I enjoyed the humour here as you explain your eating habits, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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A fun post Jessica with a play on the word cents and sense and I enjoyed the humour here as you explain your eating habits, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you Dolly! Xoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Some Cents, had me going for a bit with its paradoxical happenings involving getting a bite to eat. I see now that that was the intent all along. Funny.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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This poem, Some Cents, had me going for a bit with its paradoxical happenings involving getting a bite to eat. I see now that that was the intent all along. Funny.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Bill!
Comment from JT traveller
Might be good for a nonsense poem but this line makes no sense whatsoever,
"I eat there every day
At the most, once a week..."
Best of luck in the competition
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Might be good for a nonsense poem but this line makes no sense whatsoever,
"I eat there every day
At the most, once a week..."
Best of luck in the competition
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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That was sort of the point. Appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Teri7
This is a great Nonsense poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words that was funny and full of nonsense! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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This is a great Nonsense poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words that was funny and full of nonsense! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, Teri!
Comment from karenina
Give me a funny nonsense poem and I'm one happy camper! Your last line was the cherry on top of this sundae...
Geez. Sometimes I wish I set aside six stars for, you know, days that come after Tuesday.
(I have a self-control issue)
I want to share that this poem is kid tested. I have my grandson over (he's 9 going on 20) and he laughed his little face off!
(I joined him)
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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Give me a funny nonsense poem and I'm one happy camper! Your last line was the cherry on top of this sundae...
Geez. Sometimes I wish I set aside six stars for, you know, days that come after Tuesday.
(I have a self-control issue)
I want to share that this poem is kid tested. I have my grandson over (he's 9 going on 20) and he laughed his little face off!
(I joined him)
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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That is SO awesome to hear! Thank you both!!
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You brought joy!
Comment from royowen
How fortunate to be rich, one never has to worry about paying a bill nor do they care when others are in need, and one has those generous bucks to bless them with. This is beautifully written Jessica, I love eating out,(when we can afford it) excellent rhyming and posting, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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How fortunate to be rich, one never has to worry about paying a bill nor do they care when others are in need, and one has those generous bucks to bless them with. This is beautifully written Jessica, I love eating out,(when we can afford it) excellent rhyming and posting, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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lol, thank you so much Roy! It was fun to write a little nonsense
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Pleasure
Comment from Sally Law
How fun is this! I don't make no cents either on most days. Perfect for this contest and my best wishes for the day, and my very best to you in the vote, Jess.
Sal xoxo's
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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How fun is this! I don't make no cents either on most days. Perfect for this contest and my best wishes for the day, and my very best to you in the vote, Jess.
Sal xoxo's
Comment Written 09-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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lol thank you, Sal!
Xoxo