The Peril of the Knotted Nose
Pure Nonsense6 total reviews
Comment from Jim Wile
Oh, I like this! This really appeals to me. I'm a big fan of snot in all its forms, especially boogers which come in a great variety of shapes, colors, and sizes. Ear wax, toe jam, belly-button butter all are great, but nothing holds a candle to snot. You've done it proud with this poem!
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Oh, I like this! This really appeals to me. I'm a big fan of snot in all its forms, especially boogers which come in a great variety of shapes, colors, and sizes. Ear wax, toe jam, belly-button butter all are great, but nothing holds a candle to snot. You've done it proud with this poem!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
Comment from JT traveller
Thank you for sharing your morning thoughts. They made me laugh. A well composed, fun poem. Cleverly written. Best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
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Thank you for sharing your morning thoughts. They made me laugh. A well composed, fun poem. Cleverly written. Best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
Comment from jim vecchio
I had to read this before dinner, didn't I? Reminds me of High School when I performed to great acclaim!) the monologue from CYRANNO DE BERGERAC where he makes fun of his nose! 'Snot bad at all!
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I had to read this before dinner, didn't I? Reminds me of High School when I performed to great acclaim!) the monologue from CYRANNO DE BERGERAC where he makes fun of his nose! 'Snot bad at all!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your poem is nonsense; that you know.
It sure is bloody funny, though.
Your tale of such a lengthy nose
It rivals any garden hose
Or similes that we could make
Between your nose and any snake.
A knotted nose would be a crime -
I'll take unknotted any time!
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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Your poem is nonsense; that you know.
It sure is bloody funny, though.
Your tale of such a lengthy nose
It rivals any garden hose
Or similes that we could make
Between your nose and any snake.
A knotted nose would be a crime -
I'll take unknotted any time!
Steve
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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You should enter in the comp
Your rivalry would be a romp
Comment from JSD
Excellent nonsense. I just don't think I can write something like this. So all power to you mystery person and the best of luck in the competition.
John
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Excellent nonsense. I just don't think I can write something like this. So all power to you mystery person and the best of luck in the competition.
John
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Eeewwww. Boogers! Kids would love it! This poem is funny and gross at the same time. So excellent!
There would be a lot of boogers for that nose so I will know to stay clear l o l.
I see no issues with aesthetics for with grammar, I think it's a great submission certainly got haven't smiled on this crunchy face at the same time. Thank you for that and I hope you have a great day!
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Eeewwww. Boogers! Kids would love it! This poem is funny and gross at the same time. So excellent!
There would be a lot of boogers for that nose so I will know to stay clear l o l.
I see no issues with aesthetics for with grammar, I think it's a great submission certainly got haven't smiled on this crunchy face at the same time. Thank you for that and I hope you have a great day!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023