Couch Potatoes
The saga of couch-taters4 total reviews
Comment from patricia dillon
This is fascinating. Who does not have a little of the couch potato in them?
But the examples you give seem to carry their sybaritic lifestyle to extremes. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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This is fascinating. Who does not have a little of the couch potato in them?
But the examples you give seem to carry their sybaritic lifestyle to extremes. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a good poem for this contest. The only question is it full of nonsense or good advice? Certainly, the advice is good. Your whimsical approach and marvelous rhymes make it very fun. Excellent work. Good luck. Terry.
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This is a good poem for this contest. The only question is it full of nonsense or good advice? Certainly, the advice is good. Your whimsical approach and marvelous rhymes make it very fun. Excellent work. Good luck. Terry.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very cute, humorous poem and ingenious thinking too. Potatoes couch potatoes, family of potatoes, why not?
I'd like to picture too, very appropriate for your subject matter.
Match is perfectly!
I see, no issues with grammar or aesthetics. It's a fine Palm gave me a chuckle which is the intent after all so great job and I wish you best to luck!
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Very cute, humorous poem and ingenious thinking too. Potatoes couch potatoes, family of potatoes, why not?
I'd like to picture too, very appropriate for your subject matter.
Match is perfectly!
I see, no issues with grammar or aesthetics. It's a fine Palm gave me a chuckle which is the intent after all so great job and I wish you best to luck!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
Comment from JT traveller
Oh yes! Totally agree. There is a whole world out there to be discovered. It is not inside your phone or streamed to your television. A poignant write. Excellent. Jacqueline
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Oh yes! Totally agree. There is a whole world out there to be discovered. It is not inside your phone or streamed to your television. A poignant write. Excellent. Jacqueline
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023