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Frank

Goldfish learns to be himself.

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Comment from jim vecchio
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A good attempt at this competition. I aways make typos, so this is not a complaint, but in those last two lines, I believe it should read, "Frank listened". (past tense).

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
    Thanks for the catch and the read and feedback. I will correct. Appreciated.
reply by jim vecchio on 07-Aug-2023
    As the king of Typos, I offer you my services!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
    I tried to correct. Do you still see more?
reply by jim vecchio on 08-Aug-2023
    No more. As I've told many, I'm the King of Typos, and I mean no disrespect when I mention something.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2023
    None taken.
reply by jim vecchio on 08-Aug-2023
    To be Frank, this was good!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2023
    Thank you. I will correct.
reply by jim vecchio on 08-Aug-2023
    Not s big deal. I am The self-proclaimed King of typos. With my left hand trembling, I have to rewrite every few words.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2023
    Well, I am spelling impaired, sometimes I even baffle spellcheck.
reply by jim vecchio on 09-Aug-2023
    I make so many mistakes simply because the fingers on my left hand do not obey my bran!
Comment from JT traveller
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A few grammatical errors but a good message was delivered. I enjoyed your presentation and delivery but there are obvious errors in your writing. Just one example, "...Frank was upset when they laugh at him...". Easily remedied.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
    Thanks for the feedback, I will correct.