Comment from
karenina
Oh! This is such silly sauce I laughed in spite of myself!
Do you crack jokes in the normal course of your days?
You are very quick-witted!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
Comment from
Lea Tonin1
Lol....funny! It's good play on words it gave me a smile so thank you for that!
This is a clever idea and acute submission from the contest. I'm sure it will go far!
I see no issues with grammar or esthetics. I think it's a great submission and I wish you all the best have a great day!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
Wow! I just posted this! Thanks for your response!
Comment from
JT traveller
Haha. Good one. A funny no nonsense poem indeed. Your writing shows great creativity. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
Thank you so much for your kind words!