A Hellacious Big Bang
Spatial Space:8 total reviews
Comment from Michelle D. Carr
Your photo is magnificent and you presented this theme so well. Yes, in the end everyone knows the truth. I am learning about new poetic forms and this one is interesting. Does it have a name?
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2023
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Your photo is magnificent and you presented this theme so well. Yes, in the end everyone knows the truth. I am learning about new poetic forms and this one is interesting. Does it have a name?
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2023
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A name? Hmm. Maybe ... Inanity.
Yes, I like that seing that it could be my own, claimed from the bowels of insanity, which is what many of my subjects hold.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't know what spatial space is unless it's a description of how things fit together in space. But it's kind of like looking at a lighted cosmos. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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I don't know what spatial space is unless it's a description of how things fit together in space. But it's kind of like looking at a lighted cosmos. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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Spatial - of or relating to space, the three-dimensional realm or expanse in which all material objects are located and all events occur.
- existing or occurring in space;
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Congratulations on #500, and I only discovered your writing a few months ago; I must say I missed the boat.
A great opening referencing "The Big Bang Theory: with Sheldon and friends.
At first, I was not sure which road you were taking, but then came the cosmic finish:
"The Master of the Cosmos had a plan, drew the plan,
was and continues to be in charge, conclusively."
Brilliant. Ok, you deserve a six.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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Congratulations on #500, and I only discovered your writing a few months ago; I must say I missed the boat.
A great opening referencing "The Big Bang Theory: with Sheldon and friends.
At first, I was not sure which road you were taking, but then came the cosmic finish:
"The Master of the Cosmos had a plan, drew the plan,
was and continues to be in charge, conclusively."
Brilliant. Ok, you deserve a six.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 06-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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Can I be your friend? Mr Rogers should ask.
Thanks as always. Tom
Comment from JSD
A fun rhyme on a cosmic theme. Well constructed, containing unforced rhyme and a jaunty rhyme. I have to confess I don't know who Sheldon is, so maybe need a note, but otherwise well done.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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A fun rhyme on a cosmic theme. Well constructed, containing unforced rhyme and a jaunty rhyme. I have to confess I don't know who Sheldon is, so maybe need a note, but otherwise well done.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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One of the better understood reviews. Thank you
A note re: Sheldon has been added.
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Should have said 'jaunty rhythm'. Autocorrect!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am not a person who is well versed in science. I don't know much about the big bang, the black hole or the fifth dimension. It is all fantasy to me. But I enjoyed your poem. I prefer to believe we were all part of a plan and not just a random act of nature but that's just me. Well written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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I am not a person who is well versed in science. I don't know much about the big bang, the black hole or the fifth dimension. It is all fantasy to me. But I enjoyed your poem. I prefer to believe we were all part of a plan and not just a random act of nature but that's just me. Well written. Gretchen
Comment Written 06-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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Yep. I wonder why we , believers, tiptoe around this subject. Scientist don?t. 🧐
Comment from karenina
Congratulations on Milestone Post #500! Quite an achievement! Love your opening with a nod to "Sheldon and his friends" -- the Big Bang Theory, as it turns out, is more than a sitcom! Great lines here:
"The Master of the Cosmos had a plan, drew the plan,
was and continues to be in charge, conclusively."
There may be a writer's strike in Hollywood. So be it. A Divine Master is in charge of our fate!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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Congratulations on Milestone Post #500! Quite an achievement! Love your opening with a nod to "Sheldon and his friends" -- the Big Bang Theory, as it turns out, is more than a sitcom! Great lines here:
"The Master of the Cosmos had a plan, drew the plan,
was and continues to be in charge, conclusively."
There may be a writer's strike in Hollywood. So be it. A Divine Master is in charge of our fate!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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And you agree? 😎
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Of COURSE, I agree!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You defined special matter here in a way we could understand Tom! There are all sorts of things floating around in space and we just hope they don't enter the earths orbit and land on our planet, an unusual post and congratulations on your 500th post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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You defined special matter here in a way we could understand Tom! There are all sorts of things floating around in space and we just hope they don't enter the earths orbit and land on our planet, an unusual post and congratulations on your 500th post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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Thank you
Comment from BethShelby
We are in agreement. The creator may have set a big bang in motion so he complete the task a little quicker, but he knew it was all going to line up according to plan. I was reading yesterday and the scientists are trying to create an little "big bang" in a centrifuge at CERN. They're concerned that it might get out of hand and create bigger bang than planned.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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We are in agreement. The creator may have set a big bang in motion so he complete the task a little quicker, but he knew it was all going to line up according to plan. I was reading yesterday and the scientists are trying to create an little "big bang" in a centrifuge at CERN. They're concerned that it might get out of hand and create bigger bang than planned.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
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Great
Let?s Leave it to the scientists.
