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anti-mask crusader

regrets over not wearing a mask

4 total reviews 
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I don't care if the reward is no cents at all. This piece deserves recognition.
FOXNEWS (FAUXNEWS) is guilty of criminal conspiracy. People died, as you so well identified.
Well written. Gets my vote.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
    thanks a lot
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent
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He soon had a band of followers who staged "anti-mask" rallies, burning masks in public and running through a Walmart yelling at people for being sheep and demanding that they take off their masks and breath freely as God had intended."
I remember that every time someone is not agreeing with something, that thing ends up on the pyre: books, witches, masks, artifacts, etc.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
    thanks that was based on a true story I read at the height of the COVID pandemic anti-mask vigilantes did stage such events. Sadly, or perhaps poetic justice, many of them got CCOVID.
reply by Iza Deleanu on 07-Aug-2023
    True:)
Comment from jim vecchio
Excellent
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An excellent entry to this competition and should earn you top spot. Having my wife die of covid brought this home to me. Also, when she was alive, on the way home from church, there was a seller of "Trump masks" that we passed, so we purchased one and a sign for an outrageous amount. When we got home, we found out they were made in China!

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
    sad to hear of your loss. We had COVID last spring after a trip to Australia. I was fully vaccinated, my wife only received one shot as she had a bad reaction to the vaccination.
reply by jim vecchio on 06-Aug-2023
    My wife made sure I and our daughter had all the shots (she, too )but it didn't help her any. And to add to that, at first I couldn't even get into an assisted living facility because I got covid!
Comment from RodG
Good
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You have created a believable character in Joe Lewis, an activist who screamed against wearing a mask during the heart of the pandemic. His lesson learned tragically through the loss of his family is poignant. But his apology is much too long. Can you compress it?

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
    thanks good idea. I might fool around with the ending a bit.