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2023 Gypsy's Clubs

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8 total reviews 
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Yes, another good zen-like Haiku Gypsy! I like the connections among your three lines: ripples of time and eternity.

Very nice overall presentation for your Club contest.

Mark

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a nice weekend.

    Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr
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This was a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. The picture of the distant beach was phenomenal. It brought your words together. They made total sense. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 04-Aug-2023
    Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am giving this poem a six because the package is absolutely beautiful. The sentiment of time being eternity is wonderful as it's being carried by the ocean's waves. The color combination is beautiful.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much, Barbara, for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I see you used that awesome picture as your accompanying pic. I love that wave. Someone once gave me a card with it on there and I framed it. The poem was wonderful. It took the ripple effect to a whole new level. This was great. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much, Gretchen. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your excellent review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is thought-provoking. Of special note:

eternity reaches land
(soulful)

Beautiful presentation. Great photos. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much, Margaret. I appreciate your kindness.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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i like the imagery of waves of time and eternity reaching the shore - nice hope-filled picture...

good zen haiku
could totally see the wave splash

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your kindness.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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I like this theme, but really the main reason for life as we know is the very substance that we have in abundance on this sphere circling our sun is water, beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kindness.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 04-Aug-2023
    My pleasure
Comment from lyenochka
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What a lovely metaphor for time and eternity!! The waves are like the endless ticking of the moments and then the reaching the shore makes me think of Heaven.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. I like your interpretation... very insightful.

    Love xoxo

    Marival