Taste of My Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Sipping My Cup of Tea"The Pathway to Pain and Misery
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Comment from jim vecchio
This is a very deep work and requires several readings, as do most of your wonderful works. I truly identified with those words, "take me to Church" as I am in an assisted living facility with no means to attend, though there is a Bible class. The world sems to be growing closer to Satan by the moment, and we must avoid tasting of his delicacies.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This is a very deep work and requires several readings, as do most of your wonderful works. I truly identified with those words, "take me to Church" as I am in an assisted living facility with no means to attend, though there is a Bible class. The world sems to be growing closer to Satan by the moment, and we must avoid tasting of his delicacies.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks for reviewing this Jim and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Thank you! Blessings!
Comment from JSD
Fourth line, 'it's', does not need an apostrophe. And you have missed the 't' off 'tempt'. Otherwise this is another powerful and heartfelt poem, giving voice to your concerns and cares. Well done and thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Fourth line, 'it's', does not need an apostrophe. And you have missed the 't' off 'tempt'. Otherwise this is another powerful and heartfelt poem, giving voice to your concerns and cares. Well done and thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks for reviewing this and the Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky 1024