Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.

Sometimes eye wonderl why and no longer can see?(wonder??)

Be all alone and it's now been almost "Twenty. (quotation mark???)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks again, again, Barbara and have a wonderful day!.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

The fact that you have been through the fires and torment of terrible loss and still lean on and call out to God makes you an incredible man.

That is why I respect you and many people Iove your writing.

Never forget that God loves you and still has a PURPOSE for you. When my kid was real sick I leaned on YOUR writing. Now my youngest has an issue. A blood issue. We are heading to Childrens Hospital next week to find out why her white cells are through the roof. It could be an auto immune thing or much worse.

Your writing is a calmness in the storm. I may not rate them all especially because most deserve sixes, and I am usually out, but I do read them ALL.

Another author on here told me that your writings helped her greatly in coping with the loss of her spouse.

I know that may not help your torment, but God has honed you into a conduit to help others.

Stay strong, Ricky.
Douglas

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you Douglas and I will now present with you what I will can consider now and have done before with my abilities.
A healing prayer.
"Dear Heavenly Father above."
"With this plea, bring down all of Your power and all of Your might!"
"Help my friend Douglas with his plea."
"And help cure his child so that she can live."
"Live a strong and wonderful life."
"I say these words in the name of our Lord and savor Jesus Christ."
Amen.

reply by Douglas Goff on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you, my friend. You should consider becoming a pastor. People could learn from your story!

Comment from Michelle D. Carr

Excellent

This is a new form for me and I noticed the use of the word "eye" instead of "I". Does that refer to an actual eye or that the eye is for seeing? Very interesting. Thank you for this.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks Michelle and the eye is for seeing and yes my Poetry is a little bit different.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I felt the strain you have been enduring for so long in your words.

Your poem had good flow and cadence, no grammatical issues that I saw.

Have a great day...
John

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks for stopping by John and come back again.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"