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The Pathway to Pain and Misery
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Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
Judging others is never an answer to any problems, yet people have done it and still do judge just to get the attention off of themselves. That'a shame and helps no one. Excellent writing! Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
Thanks Alexandra for stopping by.
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Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing your poem. I enjoyed reading.
I have feelings, feelings, can't you see?Blinded and binded? (spaced needed after the question mark, binded isn't really a word, what are you trying to say?)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
I use the word binded is bound. It rhymed into sentence perfectly.
Thanks again. Have a great day!
Doctor Ricky
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