Passion For Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Love Thief"Book 3 of assorted poems
9 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! The author's words are engaging, clear and creative! I
liked the description of the "Love Thief" the author gave - it made me
stop and think of the pain it will cause! The artwork goes well with the
theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! The author's words are engaging, clear and creative! I
liked the description of the "Love Thief" the author gave - it made me
stop and think of the pain it will cause! The artwork goes well with the
theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Harmony for your kind review and for stopping by for a read. I very much appreciate it, your insightful notes are helpful and welcome, thank you very much. I hope you have a great night!
Comment from JSD
I think 'gaslighter' is one word. Otherwise this is a vicious little piece and I'm so glad to be reading your powerful writing again. Missed you lots. Second and third lines are superb.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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I think 'gaslighter' is one word. Otherwise this is a vicious little piece and I'm so glad to be reading your powerful writing again. Missed you lots. Second and third lines are superb.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Thank you, John, I hope your day is amazing. And yes, gaslighter is one word. Thank you for catching that, it has been corrected.
Thanks again for your review as well. I'm always happy to see you and read what your thoughts are so appreciate it! Thx!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Deservedly strong words here for this kind of despicable person who grooms, steals and lies, leaving nothing but cruelty and deception in his wake. Your verse sums this up so much better and more succinctly. Thanks for sharing, Lea, and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Deservedly strong words here for this kind of despicable person who grooms, steals and lies, leaving nothing but cruelty and deception in his wake. Your verse sums this up so much better and more succinctly. Thanks for sharing, Lea, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Debbie, so much for your review. Appreciate you stopping in. As always, I'm happy to hear from you. I hope you're having an awesome evening.!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem reminds me of the movie "Gaslight" with Charles Boyer. I think you did a great job of summing up the character, or lack thereof, of what could be called a 'love thief.' Very well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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This poem reminds me of the movie "Gaslight" with Charles Boyer. I think you did a great job of summing up the character, or lack thereof, of what could be called a 'love thief.' Very well done.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much again! Always appreciate it! Thank you for your kind comments too they mean alot!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
You are spot on with this one! Hopefully, you know this truth only because of what others have experienced and shared with you, rather than first-hand experience. Gas lighters are the WORST of the worst. So INSULTING that they don't think you're smart enough to recognize what you know for a fact that you saw or heard.
Very well done. I hope I see it next in the winner's circle!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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You are spot on with this one! Hopefully, you know this truth only because of what others have experienced and shared with you, rather than first-hand experience. Gas lighters are the WORST of the worst. So INSULTING that they don't think you're smart enough to recognize what you know for a fact that you saw or heard.
Very well done. I hope I see it next in the winner's circle!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Rachelle! . And yeah, unfortunately, it's a personal experience. Yet That's how we learn by putting our hand in the fire...the hard way usually.
Awesome review is always appreciate your insight and your comments. Enjoy the sunshine!
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As long as you learned, then you come away smarter and stronger should the lesson re-present itself. xo
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Lea,
First I love the image and the colours... Just perfect.
And, your choice of subject and words are wonderful.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Not sure when it will be coming up but I will look for it.
I have 3 coming up starting next week...keeping my fingers crossed.
Lisa
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Good morning Lea,
First I love the image and the colours... Just perfect.
And, your choice of subject and words are wonderful.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Not sure when it will be coming up but I will look for it.
I have 3 coming up starting next week...keeping my fingers crossed.
Lisa
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Lisa, appreciate your review as always and your kind comments always make my day too. Absolutely I will keep an Eye out for your entries.
You are an amazing writer. There is no doubt about it. I always have fun and find your descriptive words very well chosen so I'm happy to support you in any way I can. I hope that your day is awesome. Thank you again for your review. I really appreciate it!
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You are so sweet and I am quite honoured that you like my words.
Thank you so much,
Lisa
Comment from Isabel Fontes
A very smart poem Lea!
A balance between the heart disappointments.
I enjoyed reading it, flows into strong words!
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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A very smart poem Lea!
A balance between the heart disappointments.
I enjoyed reading it, flows into strong words!
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Isabel once again I thank you for your kind revdear I am most appreciative of the amazing rating you have given know that I am humbled and honored. I hope you have a grand day!
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You are most welcome, Lea :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write Lea and you seemed to cram so much into a few words here so that we know exactly what is going on, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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This is a clever write Lea and you seemed to cram so much into a few words here so that we know exactly what is going on, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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I'm really glad you like it i'm always happy to receive your reviews. So thank you again, have a great night!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
In your 3 lines you describe someone who is not sincere. This is full of imagery and descriptive words. There are few words not they are perfect for the challenge. Excellent writing! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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In your 3 lines you describe someone who is not sincere. This is full of imagery and descriptive words. There are few words not they are perfect for the challenge. Excellent writing! Best wishes!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review Alexandra! Your thoughts comments suggestions and kind words are always welcome by me and I hope you have a great evening thanks again!