2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I'm Envious of the Rain".
8 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Your words painted the feelings one has when a love has moved on to another. I felt that pain through your work and appreciated your notes. You could've made this more darker and unforgiving, but through it all, displayed a relatively positive attitude.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Your words painted the feelings one has when a love has moved on to another. I felt that pain through your work and appreciated your notes. You could've made this more darker and unforgiving, but through it all, displayed a relatively positive attitude.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Jim
Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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And hugs and blessings to you!
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic free verse, Gypsy. The dual pictures were priceless. Your words showed a degree of sadness because you were departing from him. But you had to be strong. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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This was a fantastic free verse, Gypsy. The dual pictures were priceless. Your words showed a degree of sadness because you were departing from him. But you had to be strong. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy, Blessed be.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It is horrible when a lost love moves one, but I am pretty sure the same thing will happen to with the person he moved on with. As I've said before a tiger doesn't change his stripes. Your poem is beautifully written, and the package is perfect.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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It is horrible when a lost love moves one, but I am pretty sure the same thing will happen to with the person he moved on with. As I've said before a tiger doesn't change his stripes. Your poem is beautifully written, and the package is perfect.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a sad, sad poem, Gypsy. You envy nature for their ability to do what you wish so desperately to do. But he's moved on, and you will never be able to do any of those things again. So sad. I hope it's not biographical. Well done, it was a sad, but pleasurable poem. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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What a sad, sad poem, Gypsy. You envy nature for their ability to do what you wish so desperately to do. But he's moved on, and you will never be able to do any of those things again. So sad. I hope it's not biographical. Well done, it was a sad, but pleasurable poem. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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It's fiction. :)
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That is so sad. At first, I thought the envy was of the rain, night, and wind because they were temporarily parted but it seems he has "moved on" and narrator would have to continue missing her loved one.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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That is so sad. At first, I thought the envy was of the rain, night, and wind because they were temporarily parted but it seems he has "moved on" and narrator would have to continue missing her loved one.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Love xoxo
Marival
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----I find that as much as you want to be adult about the her or him moving on and wish them well, jealousy and loss make it extremely difficult
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----I find that as much as you want to be adult about the her or him moving on and wish them well, jealousy and loss make it extremely difficult
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you for giving me such insightful review. I appreciate that you took the time.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
after i read your notes about what susurrous was, i reread the poem lol
a great free verse
i like the repetition of i'm envious with different things each time
smooth flow
i liked those last two ending lines, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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after i read your notes about what susurrous was, i reread the poem lol
a great free verse
i like the repetition of i'm envious with different things each time
smooth flow
i liked those last two ending lines, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you for giving me such insightful review. I appreciate that you took the time.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I can remember being heartbroken at the loss of one particular girl I was deeply in love with, so I can remember those terrible feelings of loss, but no so poetically as this, brilliantly done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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I can remember being heartbroken at the loss of one particular girl I was deeply in love with, so I can remember those terrible feelings of loss, but no so poetically as this, brilliantly done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you for giving me such insightful review. I appreciate that you took the time.
Gypsy hugs