Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Your entry for the upcoming contest, A Good Turn Gone Bad, is rather hysterical... Goodness...gracious... what was wrong with her!!!
Now, for just a tiny bit of common sense..really!!
Lisasview

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023

Thank you Lisa!

reply by Lisasview on 30-Jul-2023

You are most welcome.
Good luck with the contest,
Lisa

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

LOL, this is a very fun story, but rings with truth in every word. I think it could do well in the contest, good luck. It is amazing how some folks don't listen and blame someone else. Excellent writing. Terry.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023

Thanks

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is hilarious and I was so entertained with the irony within. I reckon this is a good post for the contest and a winner for me, very funny and well written, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023

thank you so much!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Some people can't be told. Your words of advice were common sense, and she ought to have known better in each of those situations. Well written story. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023

Thanks for your review

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Hah! Sorry I'm out of sixes. This one deserves it.
Non-fiction, you say? Hah! Serves her right.
well written. I hope she gets a chance to see this.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

It's 90% true. Thanks for the virtual six.

Comment from Writebynight

Excellent

Haha, I enjoyed this. There are some people out there that will always just be the way they are and no advice will ever sway them from that. She's lucky and crazy and seems to have paid the price somewhat, but she'll do exactly the same thing next time. Thanks for the entertaining read, good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Thank you for a positive review.

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

You did a fantastic job packing a lot of information, descriptions, and dialogue into this short story. It is well-written, humorous, and the kind of story that begs to be told. It is also the perfect story for this contest. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Aw, thank you!

Comment from Isabel Fontes

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading it!
Completely truth. How many times do we give advice or small tips, and people just don't follow it because they think they are above us, or for another reason that we don't know.
Well descriptive and with good dialogues, and told in a fun way.
A good, fluid read.
Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Thanks, for the review, but that's not my name.

reply by Isabel Fontes on 29-Jul-2023

Apologies.
I named it after the artwork photo. Correction made.
Good Luck with the contest!

Comment from Irene Bratton

Excellent

Oh -- my -- gosh! I would've flipped a lid! What a...bleep. Kudos to you for keeping your cool. I couldn't have done it.

Your story is well-written. I couldn't stop reading it. There's some missing punctuation, but the story is so engaging that I hardly noticed.

Awesome work and good luck in the contest. Blessings to you...

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

Thanks for your review.

reply by Irene Bratton on 28-Jul-2023

My pleasure. :)

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Exceptional

This is really amusing and so like some people who should not be traveling abroad. She flat out asked you for advice and did just the opposite. And then she suggested you should "live a little!" She's the kind of person you love to hate.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023

She actually was an very annoying woman. The company was paying for her to work.