In Lust
A sexually charged erotic scene of lust.2 total reviews
Comment from F. William Lester
It is certainly "A sexually charged erotic scene of lust" and you fulfilled your purpose in writing it. This is not the first I've read, and most share a common verbiage and description. The challenge to writing erotica is writing it in a manner that is distinct from the repetition of the ordinary, avoiding the common words, finding words that move it from the pornographic into the artful world of sensuality. Make it more than a sex act. Use allusion and emotion, leaving the rest up to the reader's imagination. Good work. Thanks for sharing it. Stay well.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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It is certainly "A sexually charged erotic scene of lust" and you fulfilled your purpose in writing it. This is not the first I've read, and most share a common verbiage and description. The challenge to writing erotica is writing it in a manner that is distinct from the repetition of the ordinary, avoiding the common words, finding words that move it from the pornographic into the artful world of sensuality. Make it more than a sex act. Use allusion and emotion, leaving the rest up to the reader's imagination. Good work. Thanks for sharing it. Stay well.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your kind feedback. I wish you an inspired day. ~ Nina
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You're very welcome
Comment from Isabel Fontes
The swaying of bodies, the moaning and perspiring.
I really enjoyed it!
Very well described and felt. every second, every minute and every breath.
Well done Nina.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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The swaying of bodies, the moaning and perspiring.
I really enjoyed it!
Very well described and felt. every second, every minute and every breath.
Well done Nina.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much Isabel. I enjoyed writing it. I wish you an inspired day. ~ Nina