2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Do like this overall presentation for your black and white motif for my favorite flower.
"full moon lives inside the bulb(s)" may extend your light idea
Mark
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Gypsy,
Do like this overall presentation for your black and white motif for my favorite flower.
"full moon lives inside the bulb(s)" may extend your light idea
Mark
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Mark. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a great haiku, Gypsy. I was totally amazed at the dual pictures-the first showed miles and miles of white tulips then a few white tulips. Your words were priceless, they were that special. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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What a great haiku, Gypsy. I was totally amazed at the dual pictures-the first showed miles and miles of white tulips then a few white tulips. Your words were priceless, they were that special. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. May you have a wonderful day :) blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful Haiku with us. Your imagery is wonderful with this poem. The white tulips and the moon's glow. It doesn't get any more beautiful than that.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful Haiku with us. Your imagery is wonderful with this poem. The white tulips and the moon's glow. It doesn't get any more beautiful than that.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What an amazing flowers and what an unique satori. I love this poem and your satori is very clever. This white tulips are unreal but your poem is believable.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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What an amazing flowers and what an unique satori. I love this poem and your satori is very clever. This white tulips are unreal but your poem is believable.
Excellent.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Lisa,
Barbara,
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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This is Lisa, Jasmine Girl.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Beautiful imagery in this. I could see the cupped tulip holding the moonbeam safe. Very evocative. Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to read. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Beautiful imagery in this. I could see the cupped tulip holding the moonbeam safe. Very evocative. Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to read. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Gretchen,
you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
tulips grow in lines like that like food? lol
anyway, this was a wonderfully imagistic haiku
like to think there's a ful moon inside the flower ready to bloom
nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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tulips grow in lines like that like food? lol
anyway, this was a wonderfully imagistic haiku
like to think there's a ful moon inside the flower ready to bloom
nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation-good syllable count and flow - interesting perspective- bright full moon casting light onto and inside of - the white (more reflective) flowers- during the night- good job AP
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation-good syllable count and flow - interesting perspective- bright full moon casting light onto and inside of - the white (more reflective) flowers- during the night- good job AP
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written haiku Gypsy, you have many ways of looking at things, your intuition and perception is second to none, this is beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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A beautifully written haiku Gypsy, you have many ways of looking at things, your intuition and perception is second to none, this is beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
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Well done
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
The monochromatic colors are striking and the lines are orderly . This seems to give a sense of peace because it is a predictable image. Inside the flowers reflecting the full moon symbolizes an inner realization to me. 5his is beautiful and extraordinary, yet simile. Love Alexan xx
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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The monochromatic colors are striking and the lines are orderly . This seems to give a sense of peace because it is a predictable image. Inside the flowers reflecting the full moon symbolizes an inner realization to me. 5his is beautiful and extraordinary, yet simile. Love Alexan xx
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love xoxo
Marival
Comment from lyenochka
I would think the full moon would make the white tulips glow with extra light. I like how you create that scenario for us to imagine in our minds as well as in your well chosen pictures!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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I would think the full moon would make the white tulips glow with extra light. I like how you create that scenario for us to imagine in our minds as well as in your well chosen pictures!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you, dear big sister. You always understand my writing.
Love xoxo
Marival