Walking Hand In Hand.
Across The Foamy Sand.2 total reviews
Comment from Tamkai Moore
I like the humor in it. I like the photo with the title and feels it a great fit with the poems. Feel like the color to the background is too bright. Especially with the photo already being light. I will definitely look out for more writing from you and looking forward to reading it. Keep up the good work. Don't lose the humor. My favorite part of it.
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I like the humor in it. I like the photo with the title and feels it a great fit with the poems. Feel like the color to the background is too bright. Especially with the photo already being light. I will definitely look out for more writing from you and looking forward to reading it. Keep up the good work. Don't lose the humor. My favorite part of it.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
Comment from Paul Manton
You've been busy today, Rhonnie.
I see though that for such a young guy, you are wise way beyond your years when it comes to women!
Know your girl Rhonnie - it's called the 'preemptive strike'!
That means, just like here, you can field the impossible question instinctively, and live to tell the tale!
You will, I think, just like Mr.Spock, 'live long and prosper!'
You mean, she wasn't wearing a bikini? No, don't go there!
Paul
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You've been busy today, Rhonnie.
I see though that for such a young guy, you are wise way beyond your years when it comes to women!
Know your girl Rhonnie - it's called the 'preemptive strike'!
That means, just like here, you can field the impossible question instinctively, and live to tell the tale!
You will, I think, just like Mr.Spock, 'live long and prosper!'
You mean, she wasn't wearing a bikini? No, don't go there!
Paul
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023