2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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15 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Beautiful piece. I love the reds and yellows. You really have a way with words. One of my favorite moments in lie was watching a sunset off of Maui. There is really no place quite like that. Congrats and reaching 3500 pieces my friend. Just wanted to celebrate by reviewing your works!
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Beautiful piece. I love the reds and yellows. You really have a way with words. One of my favorite moments in lie was watching a sunset off of Maui. There is really no place quite like that. Congrats and reaching 3500 pieces my friend. Just wanted to celebrate by reviewing your works!
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Douglas, I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a beautiful haiku.
Your words and presentation give your reader peace, comfort and relaxation.
It is stunning and perfect.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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This is a beautiful haiku.
Your words and presentation give your reader peace, comfort and relaxation.
It is stunning and perfect.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Mary, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. May you have a wonderful day :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a great haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were right on. Your words were spot on and very correct, they definitely hit the spot. This was beautifully done. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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This was a great haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were right on. Your words were spot on and very correct, they definitely hit the spot. This was beautifully done. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr. Have a wonderful day. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The thought of a ruby sunset is a perfect description. I enjoyed reading this Haiku. It's beautiful as is the package it comes with. Once again, you've proven to b the Queen of Haiku.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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The thought of a ruby sunset is a perfect description. I enjoyed reading this Haiku. It's beautiful as is the package it comes with. Once again, you've proven to b the Queen of Haiku.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Ruby,
Your photo is beautiful, yet haunting.
Your words paint a picture of the sunset as guardian, friend, and source of comfort as it whispers, 'goodnight to you.
Your presentation is excellent.
Good luck, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Ruby,
Your photo is beautiful, yet haunting.
Your words paint a picture of the sunset as guardian, friend, and source of comfort as it whispers, 'goodnight to you.
Your presentation is excellent.
Good luck, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Cindy. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
oooh this was great. love the idea of the wind whispering good night and the sunset tucking you in.
cool imagery and smooth flow
as well as cool pics and presentation, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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oooh this was great. love the idea of the wind whispering good night and the sunset tucking you in.
cool imagery and smooth flow
as well as cool pics and presentation, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate that you took the time to read my poem. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I loved this haiku with the personifications of the sunset and the wind and the alliteration in the last line. You have a gift for leaving a good feeling with the reader.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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I loved this haiku with the personifications of the sunset and the wind and the alliteration in the last line. You have a gift for leaving a good feeling with the reader.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Verna. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
The words expressed are most descriptive. Each line evokes an experience that can be easily sensed.
Mark
P.S. It appears to my eye that the font size in your first line is not the same as the ones that follow - intentional or not?
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Gypsy,
The words expressed are most descriptive. Each line evokes an experience that can be easily sensed.
Mark
P.S. It appears to my eye that the font size in your first line is not the same as the ones that follow - intentional or not?
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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I made the first line bigger on purpose. Thank you very much, Mark. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like that the sunset became a nurturing entity. It became mother and nurse maid. Very personable and a character in this poem. The imagery was sharp and vivid. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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I like that the sunset became a nurturing entity. It became mother and nurse maid. Very personable and a character in this poem. The imagery was sharp and vivid. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
I can't split my love between sunset and sunrise... they both hold my heart within a held breath, a pause and then a sigh. To give gratitude for another precious day upon this physical plain at the going down of a ruby sunset is a glorious thought. It does tuck you in at the end of day, as the wind gently picks up across the bay, caresses your senses, and whispers goodnight into your ears. Its there we know that we are loved by a greater force... for the beauty allowed us, is, and can only be the love of our Creator.
A truly stunning presentation with the composition to match... a haiku that seeps into ones soul.
With our thoughts we create...
the grace of beauty.
Warm regards,
James.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Hi MariVal,
I can't split my love between sunset and sunrise... they both hold my heart within a held breath, a pause and then a sigh. To give gratitude for another precious day upon this physical plain at the going down of a ruby sunset is a glorious thought. It does tuck you in at the end of day, as the wind gently picks up across the bay, caresses your senses, and whispers goodnight into your ears. Its there we know that we are loved by a greater force... for the beauty allowed us, is, and can only be the love of our Creator.
A truly stunning presentation with the composition to match... a haiku that seeps into ones soul.
With our thoughts we create...
the grace of beauty.
Warm regards,
James.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Dear friend,
Thank you very much, James. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
besitos y abrazos
MariVal
"For life and death are one, even as the river and sea are one."
?Khalil Gibran