Comment from
Andrea Kepple
Your poem made me smile at how it ended. I found myself wondering where you were going with the poem as I followed through, open then closed, light and then dark. I like the way you describe blinking with different comparisons.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
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Comment from
kiwisteveh
Hi, Jo.
Funny where the mind goes, isn't it. We start with the trivial thing, a blink, and follow it in some sort of obsession, trying to make sense of it. I'm sure researchers somewhere have solved the blink, but your analysis is more fun!
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
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