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I Choose Rainbows

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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from Andrea Kepple
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Your poem made me smile at how it ended. I found myself wondering where you were going with the poem as I followed through, open then closed, light and then dark. I like the way you describe blinking with different comparisons.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
    And I like you.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Hi, Jo.

Funny where the mind goes, isn't it. We start with the trivial thing, a blink, and follow it in some sort of obsession, trying to make sense of it. I'm sure researchers somewhere have solved the blink, but your analysis is more fun!

Steve

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
    Thanks. It?s nice t
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
    Thanks. It?s nice t