More Than Love
Time waits for no man...or woman3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Say what again? Her face fell off? I know you were limited to 100 words here and you had a heck of a beginning...but oh--I'm afraid I'm lost as to what happened here? (I would have flunked sci-fi if it were a school subject)--
Karenina
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Say what again? Her face fell off? I know you were limited to 100 words here and you had a heck of a beginning...but oh--I'm afraid I'm lost as to what happened here? (I would have flunked sci-fi if it were a school subject)--
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
Comment from JSD
Oh excellent. Spooky and a serious warning for us all. Great use of the few words available to capture the reader. Well done.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Oh excellent. Spooky and a serious warning for us all. Great use of the few words available to capture the reader. Well done.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you! I just made it in 100 words!
Comment from royowen
This is a great trip to that eternal mystery that is time. When Adam and Eve first walked this earth, they were immortal, God had warned them not to external of the forbidden fruit lest they would die, of course that's when time began how can one die in eternity? A unique plot, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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This is a great trip to that eternal mystery that is time. When Adam and Eve first walked this earth, they were immortal, God had warned them not to external of the forbidden fruit lest they would die, of course that's when time began how can one die in eternity? A unique plot, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks and many Blessings to you!
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Most welcome