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One Man's Calling

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Following God

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Comment from Ric Myworld
Exceptional
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Yes, sir, sounds like there are more people after Ben's butt than hornets from the holler (cove). And I'm sure this is one of those times when having more faith than a mustard seed isn't going to be too easy. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
    Thanks 'you' for reviewing.
    And thank you immeasurably for the six stars.
    If you tell me what you read last, I might could catch you up with a brief synopsis.
reply by Ric Myworld on 27-Jul-2023
    Once I get squared away I plan to go back and try to catch up on all the reading I can. I appreciate your kindness!
Comment from Jay Squires
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

One of my very favorites, Wayne. I loved the way Ben ministered to Michael and how Michael came under the Spirit and Ben's joy in telling the passing people not to worry, that Michael was just praying. Ben is a powerful character.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
    Thank you. And thank you immensely for the six stars.
reply by Jay Squires on 27-Jul-2023
    You get fewer sixes than I am able to give you, Wayne.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
    smiley face here!
Comment from Ben Colder
Exceptional
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Don't see many of us old tent and street preachers anymore but God is still in the saving business. I enjoyed your story. I am sure God will handle the problem in His way.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
    Thank you immensely for the six stars!
    I appreciate your review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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It is wonderful that Ben got through to the minister who didn't know how to love everyone and himself. The deal with the schools sounds like a great one for everyone concerned.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Good work, Wayne. The situation with that pastor is probably more common than one would like to think. Ben sees the core of his problem and deals with it, leading to his repentance. Ben is of course not out of danger but remains calm and focused on his mission. Always a good read.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you. I always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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This is a very extremely well written chapter engaging from beginning to end. a
Although I have not read much of this book, I found it interesting that I can be engaged within a chapter so far into it. So that speaks to me of great writing!
I see, no issues with grammar, spelling punctuation or sentence structure it is also esthetically pleasing as well. I look forward to reading More of this. Thank you for this submission. I hope your day is Great!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you. Coming into the story late, but having the opinion that you do, is very encouraging. Thank you.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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You are a good story teller. What happens between Michael and Ben is well written by you.

You caught me hooked up and I can't help but follow till the end of the story.

I like the ending that Ben preached at a particular corner.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your uplifting review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh dear. Poor Ben has two people putting on a price on his head but they want him alive to do more harm to him. Well, we know that God is greater than those bad guys and can change their hearts. But I wonder if Ben will take a counseling job with all the dangers that could affect him and kids he would mentor.

I really liked Ben's message to Michael. That's the message my dad needed to hear because he only became a pastor because his dad and brother were. He was not called and he didn't like people.

Do you love your congregation ,Michael" Do you (question mark instead of end quotes)

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Oops.Thank you for your kind review and for the catch.
Comment from BethShelby
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With all those people wantig Ben to do terrible things to him, if God wasn't protecting hime someone would have him by now. I hate to see him leave his little friend at the school but I would think God might have another city in mind for him. I'm enjoying the story.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much. Your kind words are very much appreciated.