2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Drifting Aimlessly"-
6 total reviews
Comment from aryr
What a great tanka, Gypsy. I really appreciate the pictures. I enjoyed your words because they told the truth, of drifting wild and free with only the moon as company. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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What a great tanka, Gypsy. I really appreciate the pictures. I enjoyed your words because they told the truth, of drifting wild and free with only the moon as company. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
But, but, but... the moon is a great companion. I know it is. I'm sorry about the sea of tears, but it makes for a great description in a poem. That's something. I enjoyed reading. Your poem is beautiful as is the package.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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But, but, but... the moon is a great companion. I know it is. I'm sorry about the sea of tears, but it makes for a great description in a poem. That's something. I enjoyed reading. Your poem is beautiful as is the package.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Tanka poems are dramatic and often about love's passion and loss.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
A beautiful poem, with a lonely tone. The silent moon as your companion shows how list one feels. I think the poem fits not only a breakup but just loneliness in general. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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A beautiful poem, with a lonely tone. The silent moon as your companion shows how list one feels. I think the poem fits not only a breakup but just loneliness in general. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like you Tanka poem - Excellent picture presentation's both = way cool!
Poem has a good flow and a clever message - on a sea of tears without an oar -nice - feeling sad/blue - like the blue moon - nice - only companion -both blue - nice connection. Word count 5/7/4/5/6 ? Good Job. AP
'my only real companion - 7
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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I like you Tanka poem - Excellent picture presentation's both = way cool!
Poem has a good flow and a clever message - on a sea of tears without an oar -nice - feeling sad/blue - like the blue moon - nice - only companion -both blue - nice connection. Word count 5/7/4/5/6 ? Good Job. AP
'my only real companion - 7
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, ap. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
well, you can always use your hands as oars LOL!
love that bird and moon pic!
a great tanka with cool imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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well, you can always use your hands as oars LOL!
love that bird and moon pic!
a great tanka with cool imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That is always a good consolation. The moon is the Earth's companion and she's always there for anyone who is drifting aimlessly and lonely. Because she is on a faithful course gliding by our side.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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That is always a good consolation. The moon is the Earth's companion and she's always there for anyone who is drifting aimlessly and lonely. Because she is on a faithful course gliding by our side.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Yes, wherever you go, there she is LoL
Thank you for the insightful review. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
love xoxo
marival