Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are sweet and perfect for a child's imagination. I
thought about these words and know my grandson who is six would
like the words of this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is adorable and compliments the theme and words of this poem!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023

I really appreciate this wonderful review. :)

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Exceptional

I have a feeling this poem will come out first. Anyway, I'm voting for you. It's endearing and tender. The rhymes are very well imagined, the iambic tetrameter makes it a lively poem.
I like the last line where you let the reader into the fantasy: want to imagine things with me?
Beautiful!!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you for this exceptional review and your vote...I'm thrilled that you liked it. :)

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is an adorable verse for children as well as adults inspiring with dreams of travel and activity on sea, land and in space and encouraging the reader to come along on this fun, imaginative, magical mystery tour. Great fun! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you for this terrific review, I appreciate it very much. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a delightful poem and sure to be a cherished bedtime favoritie for any child. Aptly illustrated too. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you so much. I hope you have a great day.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A nicely written rhyming poem in couplets, with my favourite background colour. But yes, I think our imagination can certainly take us to places other people haven't been to, beautifully written, articulate and imaginative, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words. :)

reply by royowen on 24-Jul-2023

Well done

Comment from WendyLea

Excellent

What a magnificent poem! So much detail and perfect rhyming. I was able to imagine being with you along your travels. I truly enjoyed your writing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you, this great review means a,lot to me. :)

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Exceptional

This is a charming children's poem. The rhyme is outstanding. With the "a" left out before circus clown, the rhythm would be perfect. The question at the end rounds it out just right.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you for this exceptional review and for your great suggestion...I've fixed it for the better. Have a terrific day. :)