Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,
Of course, I like your alliteration flourishes.

The wind chimes do create those serenades in gentle breezes.

Nice artwork accompanies your verse.

Mark

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.

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Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I can almost hear the windchimes. This Haiku, in so few words, is rich in imagery of the ocean and the "summer serenade."
Beautifully written and presented.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Mary, I appreciate your excellent five stars review and kind words.

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Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a great haiku, Gypsy. I really appreciated the wind chimes, they brought music to the world. Your words matched their intent profoundly. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your excellent review. May you have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.

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reply by aryr on 21-Jul-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 3/5/5 Summer Haiku was well written. Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues Thanks for sharing this and have a great day Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Dr Ricky. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I have numerous wind chimes outside and I find it soothing to listen to them. I have them out front and, in the back, so I hear them anywhere from inside the house. I only wish I had an ocean breeze to help them along. I enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i love windchimes... miss mine lol - had a kitty one, an angel one, and a moon/stars one...

love the ocean breeze getting "tangled" in the windchimes serenading all within hearing distance

great haiku with great imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.

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Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Love this one summer poem. I can imagine you actually had this experience on one of many beaches in LA. I can hear the sound, both the waves and the windchime.

Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. Lisa.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"tangled in windchimes" pure music, how wonderfully peaceful this work and image are, bring on summer, I find it more comfortable when it is warm, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's lovely! I like the idea of the ocean breeze being "tangled in windchimes" and causing a "summer serenade." That's perfect, poetic, and conjures up the sense of feeling and sound.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. Big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from AP Apgar

Exceptional

I like this haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow - perfectly divided- setting- ocean breeze at the beach- tangled in wind chimes (two words) very clever- excellent satori tying to sound of the wind chimes- very nice job AP

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and help.

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